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Mere Shauk Da Nai Aitbar is the Punjabi translation of a Farsi ghazal by Mirza Ghalib that was translated to Punjabi. Punjabi lyrics translated by Sufi Ghulam Mustafa Tabassum.  I heard today from a historian in Pakistan that it was one of the first songs that made Ghulam Ali popular. The ghazal has been composed in Raag Dhanasri, which seems a raag that Ghulam Ali is one of the few people that has as his favorite.  His other famous ghazal, Chupke Chupke is also in the same raag. 

Here is the ghazal, its lyrics in punjabi and the original farsi ghazal by Mirza Ghalib. The subject of the ghazal is love; especially being intoxicated in love over following the ways of the world.  




Punjabi Translation of Mere Shau Da Nahi

Original lyrics: Mirza Ghalib
Punjabi Translation: Sufi Ghulam Mustafa Tabassum

mere shauq da nahiiN aitbaar teN nuuN aa jaa vekh meraa intezaar aa jaa
aiNveN laRan b'haane labhnaa iiN, kii tuu sochanaa iiN sitamgaar aa jaa

bhaaveN hij'r te bhaaveN visaal hove, vakkho vakkh dohaan diiaaN lazttaN neN
mere sohniaa jaa tuu hzaar vaarii, aa jaa piaaria te lakkh vaar aa jaa

eh rivaaz ai masjidaaN maNdiraaN da, othe hastiiaaN te Khud parastiiaaN neN
maiKhaane vicch mastiiaaN ii mastiiaaN neN, hosh kar ban ke hoshiaar aa jaa

tuu saada te tera dil saadaa, teN nuuN aiNveN raqiib kuraah paaia
je tuuN mere janaaze te nahiiN aaia, raah takdaa ii terii m'zaar aa jaa

sukhii vassna je tuuN chauhnaa eN, mere ghaliba ais j'haan andar
aa jaa riNdaaN dii bazam vicch aa beh jaa, aithe baithde neN Khaaksaar aa jaa


Ghalib took great pride in his Farsi poetry as opposed to his
work in Urdu. He has said:

Farsi been ta ba-beeni naqsh-haa'-e- rang rang
ba-guzar az majmoo'-e-Urdu keh be-rang-e-man ast
[Farsi ko dekho ta keh ranga rang naqsh dekho
maire Urdu ke majmoo'e ko chhoRo keh be-rang hai]

Ghalib's Original Ghazal - za man gar-at na-bavad intezaar be'aa

za man gar-at na-bavad intezaar be'aa
bahaana jooe mabaash va sateeza-kaar be'aa
[agar maire intizaar ka yaqeen nahin karta to aa ja
bahaane na banaa aur jaldi aa ja]

be yak do sheva-e-sitam dil nam-me shavad khursand
be marg-e-man keh ba saamaan-e-rozgaar be'aa

[aik do sitam se dil ko tasalli nahiN hoti
meri maut ke liye, jahaan ke saamaan ke saath aa ???????]

bahaana joo'st dar ilzaam mudda'ee shauq-at
yake ba raghm-e-dil-e-naa-umeed vaar be'aa
[teri muhabbat ka daa'va karne vaala (dil) bahaana-joo hai
aik dafa' dil-e-naa-umeedvaar ki hiqaarat (to spite it) meN hi
aa ja]

halaak-e-shevah-e-tamkeen ma-kha(w)aah mastaan raa
'anaan gasastah-tar az baad-e-nau-bahaar be'aa
[yeh na chaah ke tere divaane tere naaz se halaak ho jaa'eN
havaa se zayaadah aazaad (be-lagaam) ho kar aa ja]

za-maa gasasti va ba deegaraan garo basti
be'aa keh 'ehd-e-vafaa neest ustavaar be'aa
[ham se rishta toR kar doosaroN se baaNdh diya hai
aa keh 'ehd-evafaa pakka nahiN hai]

vadaa'-o-vasl judaagaana lazzate daarad
hazaar baar baro, sad hazaar baar be'aa
[vadaa' (goodbye) aur vasl ki lazzat judaa gaana hai
hazaar baar jaa, aur laakh baar aa]

za khoo'-e-tu-st nehaad-e-shakeeb naazuk-tar
be'aa keh dast-o-dil-am me-ravad za-kaar be'aa
[teri khoo se sabr ki tabee'at naazuk tar hai
aa keh mere dast-o-dil kaam se jaane vaale haiN]

hisaar-e'aafiyati gar havas kuni Ghalib
chu maa ba halqa'e'rindaan-e-khaak-saar be'aa
[Ghalib agar tu chaahta hai keh 'aafiat (khairiyyat) ke hisaar
(qil'e) meN rahe
to hamaari tarah rindaan-e-khaaksaar ke halqe meN aa ja].

Translation in English: 
Translated by Shivpreet Singh

Come Fast

You appear to doubt the depth of my passion,
Why not witness my fervor firsthand, come fast!
Don't delay with trivial excuses and hesitations,
Such skepticism? Oh, you who hold sway, come fast!

Whether from afar or in close vicinity,
I savor delight in each, individually.
My love, you may leave me a thousand times if you wish,
But my dearest, come a million times, come fast!

In the tradition of mosques and temples,
You will find big figures and egos there
In this realm of wine, only ecstasy reigns,
Show some wisdom, be sober, come fast!

Your purity matches the purity of your heart,
Your unwarranted enmity is unjustified from the start.
Since you didn't attend my final rite,
My grave yearns your presence, come fast!

If you wish to attain bliss,
in this world, O Ghalib
Join the intoxicated souls without delay,
Come sit with the down-to-earth ones, come fast!
I am listening and reading about Amir Khusro's poetry tonight. First let me share my translation of his ghazal Guftam ke rohan az qamar, which is really a conversation with God (not unlike Allama Iqbal, Guru Nanak, and Neale Donald Walsch). Following this translation you will find another translation of the poem as well as some couplets sung by Bahauddin Khan Qawwal and party. 


I asked, "Is anything more radiant than the moon's light?"
He replied, "Yes, my face shines just as bright."

"And sweeter than sugar in this earthly place?"
"My words make sugar seem dull and commonplace."

"What's death for lovers?" - my voice soft and shy,
"Parting from the beloved," was his reply.

"And life's pain, can it find a remedy?"
"Just seeing me should bring your harmony."

"The right path for lovers?" I implore,
"Only faithfulness of lovers I adore."

"Be not cruel, unfair," I begged with tears,
"That's how I've worked all the years."

"Are you of angels or fairies rare?"
"Lord of them all," he smiled, "beyond compare."

"Your love has broken Khusrau's heart today."
"To be my love, that's the price you pay."



Bahauddin Khan Qawwal (1934-2006), whose party render the qawwali below, traced his lineage back to the days of Amir Khusrau. To remind centuries-yet-to-be that he had loved his murshid, Khusrau banded together twelve youngsters, personally trained them, funded them, and performed with them. He appointed Mian Saamat as the leader of the Bachche (Youngsters) Qawwal. Bahauddin's family claims descent from the Bachche.



The first couplet is by Saʿdī. Abū-Muhammad Muslih al-Dīn bin Abdallāh Shīrāzī, aka Saʿdī Shirazi (Persian: ابومحمد مصلح الدین بن عبدالله شیرازی‎; 1210-1292) was the major classical Persian poet of the middle ages, recognized for the quality of his composition and for the depth of his thought.

اگرم حیات بخشی و گرم هلاک خواهی
سر بندگی به حکمت بنهم که پادشاهی

Garam hayat bakhshi wa garam hayat khwahi
Sar-e-bandagi-ba-khidmat bane humke badshahi

Grant me a warm new life or grant me a hot death
I bow my head at Thy service and make Thee my king.

The second couplet is by ‘Araqi. Fakhr al-dīn Ibrahīm ‘Irāqī, or ‘Araqi (Persian: فخرالدین ابراهیم عراقی‎; 1213-1289), was a Persian Sufi master (a friend of Jalaluddin Rumi), poet and writer. Born in Hamedan, (i.e. 'Irani Iraq'), ‘Araqi spent many years in Multan in the Indian subcontinent, as well as in Konya in present day Turkey.

نہ شود نصب دشمن، کہ شود ہلاک تیغت
سر دوستاں سلامت، کہ تو خنجر آزمائی


Na shabad naseeb-e-dushman ke shabad halaq-e-taighat
Sar-e-doston-salamat ke tu khanjarat ma aaye

Why should our enemies be so fortunate to die by Thine hands?
The heads of comrades are standing alive, ready for dagger-wielder Thou.

The rest is by Amir Khusrau (1253-1305):

گفتم که روشن از قمر گفتا که رخسار منست

گفتم که شیرین از شکر گفتا که گفتار منست


Guftam ke roshan az qamar gufta ke rukhsar-e-man ast
Guftam ke shireen az shakar gufta ke guftar-e-man ast


I asked: 'What is brighter than the moon?' She said: 'It is my face.'
I asked: 'What is sweeter than sugar?' She said: 'It is my talk.'


گفتم کہ مرگِ ناگہاں، گفتا که درد هجر من
گفتم علاج زندگی ،گفتا که دیدار منست


Guftam ke marg-e-'ashiqan gufta ke dard-e-hijr-e-man
Guftam 'ilaaj-e-zindagi gufta ke deedar-e-man ast


I asked about the death of lovers; She said; 'The pain of being separated from me.'
I asked about the cure of life; She said: 'It is the sight of my face.'


گفتم طریق عاشقان گفتا وفاداری بود
گفتم مکن جور و جفا، گفتا کہ این کار منست


Guftam tareeq-e-'ashiqan gufta wafadari buwad
Guftam makun jaur o jafa gufta ke iin kar-e-man ast


I asked about the way of lovers; She said: 'Fidelity.'
I said: 'Then do not be cruel and wicked.' She said: 'That is my task.'


گفتم که حوری یا پری ، گفتا که من شاه ِ بتاں
گفتم که خسرو ناتوان گفتا پرستار منست


Guftam ke houri ya pari gufta ke man shah-e-butan
Guftam ke Khusrau na-tavaan gufta parastar-e-man ast


I said: 'Are you a houri or a fairy?' She said: 'Of idols I am King.'
I said: 'Khusrau is helpless.' She said: 'Worship me.'


In his Lectures on Aesthetics, Hegel wrote:

Pantheistic poetry has had, it must be said, a higher and freer development in the Islamic world, especially among the Persians ... The full flowering of Persian poetry comes at the height of its complete transformation in speech and national character, through Mohammedanism ... In later times, poetry of this order [Ferdowsi's epic poetry] had a sequel in love epics of extraordinary tenderness and sweetness; but there followed also a turn toward the didactic, where, with a rich experience of life, the far-traveled Saadi was master before it submerged itself in the depths of the pantheistic mysticism taught and recommended in the extraordinary tales and legendary narrations of the great Jalal-ed-Din Rumi.


اگرم حیات بخشی و گرم هلاک خواهیسر بندگی به حکمت بنهم که پادشاهی

Har lehza ba shakl aan - 
(written shaklay but sung shakl aan by most qawwals)

While this ghazal is often attributed to Rumi, this is actually the poetry of Shams Mashraqi who used pen name of Rumi. Maulana Rum never used rumi as takhallas.  

Har lehza ba shakl aan but-e-ayyar baraamad  
Dil burd-o-nihaan shud 
Har dum ba libaas-e-digar aan yaar baraamad 
Gah peer-o-jawaan shud 


हर दम वो ख़ूबसूरत चेहरा एक नई शक्ल में ज़ाहिर होता 
दिल चुराता और गायब हो जाता 
हर वक़्त यार दूसरों के लिबास में ज़ाहिर होता 
कभी बूढ़े के रूप में कभी जवान के 

O' that trickster idol-beloved! Every time he made an appearance, he had a different face
He pulled the people's hearts, And hid from view. 
Every time he came out in a different garb
He was sometimes young, And sometimes he was old. 

Khud kuza o khud kuzagar-o-khud gil-e-kuzaa 
Khud rind-e-sabu kash 
Khud bar sar-e-aan kuza khareedaar baraamad 
Bishkast o rawaan shud 

वो ख़ुद ही कूज़ा है खुद कूज़ा बनाने वाला है और खुद ही कूज़े की मिटटी है 
फ़िर ख़ुद ही उस कूज़े को पीने वाला
सरे-आम ख़ुद ही कूज़े का ख़रीदार बनकर ज़ाहिर होता 
इस लिए उसके लिए कूज़े का तोड़ना भी जायज़ है  

He was himself clay and flask, And potter, and also the wine tippler. 
And then he himself came out As buyer for the flask, 
And he broke it, and moved on. 

Nai nai ke hameen bood ke mi aamad o mi raft 
Har qarn ke deedaim 
Taa aaqebat aan shakl-e-arab vaar baraamad 
Dara-e-jahaan shud 

वही था जो हर ज़माने में आता रहा और जाता रहा 
हर ज़माने नेकि  उसे देखा 
बिल आख़िर वो एक अरब बनकर ज़ाहिर हुआ 
और वही जहान का बादशाह है 

Nay! It was he that came and went 
In all the ages, as I saw,
Till finally, he showed himself In the Arabian's form 
and took the world for his kingdom. 

Nai nai ke hamoon bood ke mi guft anal haq 
Dar soorat-e-Mansoor 
Mansoor na boodaan ke baraandaar baraamad 
Naadaan ba gumaan shud 

वही था जिसने कहा कि मैं ही हक़ हूँ 
ख़ुदा की आवाज़ में 
वो मंसूर नहीं था जो सूली पर ज़ाहिर हुआ 
नादान लोग उसे मंसूर समझते रहे 

Nay! It was he who proclaimed "I am the Truth" 
In Mansur's words; 
It wasn't Mansur who was in public view, On the scaffold, 
Fools fell into error. 

Rumi sukhanay kufra na guftast na goyed 
munkir na shabai dast  
Kafir shavad aan kas kay ba inkaar baraamad 
Mardood-e-jahaan shud 

रूमी ने कभी कुफ़्र की बात न की है और न करता है 
वह मुन्किर नहीं है 
काफ़िर तो वो है जिसने इनक़ार किया था यानी शैतान ...
वही दोज़ख़ियों में से है  

Rumi has spoken in denial, 
And none in the wide world speaks or Spoke thus. 
Those who come out in denial Are cast out, 
And become rejects, world-wide. 

(Translated by S. R. Faruqi)


Butte Ayyar - The Sly Beloved

Rumi uses "butt-e-ayyar" in the beginning of the ghazal: 
Har lehza ba shaklay but-e-ayyar baraamad 
Dil burd-o-nihaan shud 

Ayyar was historically used for rogue fighters -- somewhat like guerilla fighters; ones who would hide and attack surprisingly.  An 'ayyaar' in this case is a lover that has a surprise attack.  Some say it is used as a "beloved sly" described in this idiom in Persian Sufi poetry. Whether it is beloved sly or a surprise attacker, it is a lover that fools us with so much ease into believing that He is not there when he actually is there!

Bhai Nandlal uses "butte ayyar" in one of his couplets in the ghazal Deen-o-Duniya. Because he was an Islamic scholar who often talks about Mansoor in his poetry, he was likely aware of this popular Rumi ghazal: 

Gaahe Sufi Gaahe Zahid Geh kalandar mi shavad
rang-haye mukhtalif daarad butte ayaar-e-ma

I heard one of the qawwal's using what seems like a punjabi translation of Bhai Nandlal's poem. This was after my making the butte-ayyar connection. So its possible that one of the qawwals had also studied bhai nandlal's ghazals:

Sufi zaahid mast kalandar naam ose de saare
har jaan vasse yaar peyaara ves vataa ke nyaare


Persian Lyrics and Alternative Urdu/English Translation

Persian Lyrics 


هر لحظه به شکل بت عیار بر آمد دل بُرد و نهان شد
هر دم به لباس دگر آن یار بر آمد گه پیر و جوان شد

گه نوحؑ شد و کرد جهانی بدعا غرق خود رفت به کشتی
گه گشت خلیلؑ بہ در نار بر آمد آتش گُل از آن شد

یوسفؑ شد و در مصر فرستاد قمیصی آن جلوہ عالم
در دیده یعقوبؑ چو انوار بر آمد نادیده عیان شد

خود کوزہ و خود کوزہ گر و خود گلِ کوزہ, خود رندِ سبو کش
خود بر سرِ آں کوزہ خریدار برآمد, بشکست و رواں شد

ایں جمله همیں بود که می آمد و می رفت هر قرن که دیدی
تا عاقبت آن شکل عربؐ دار بر آمد دارای جهان شد

رومیؔ سخن کفر نہ گفت است و نگوید منکر مشویدش
کافر شود آن کس که به انکار بر آمد مردود جہاں شد

Urdu Translation


ہر لمحہ وہ ایک دِلرُبا بُت کی صورت میں آتا ہے
دل چھینتا ہےاور غائب ہوجاتا ہے
ہر لمحہ، محبوب ایک نئے لباس میں ظاہر ہوتا ہے
کبھی جوان تو کبھی پیر


کبھی وہ نوحؑ ہُوا، دعا سے جہان غرق کیا
خود کشتی پہ چلا گیا
کبھی وہ ابراہیمؑ ہُوا، بیچ آگ کے جلوہ نما
آتش اُسی سے گلزار ہوئی


کبھی وہ یوسفؑ ہُوا، اور مصرسے اپنی قمیض بھیجی
جہان کو روشن کرنے والا
وہی یعقوبؑ کی آنکھوں میں منور ہوا
تبھی آنکھوں میں بینائی آئی


خود ہی کُوزہ، خود ہی کوزہ ساز، خود ہی کوزہ کی مٹی
خود ہی جام نوش کرنے والا رند
خود ہی اس کوزہ کا خریداربن آتا ہے
خود ہی توڑکے چلا جاتا ہے



یہ تمام ، وہی تو تھا کہ جو آتا تھا اور جاتا تھا
ہر زمانے میں جو تم نے دیکھا
بالاخر ایک عربی ﷺ کی صورت میں ظاہر
جہان کا تاجدار ہو گیا

رومی نے کفر کی بات نہیں کی، اور نہ ہی کرتا
وہ منکر نہیں ہوا
کافر تو وہ ہوا جس نے انکار کیا (شیطان)
مردود قرار پایا


English translation



Every Moment, He arrives in a beautiful sculpture;
conquers hearts & disappears.

Every Moment, that beloved appears in a new dress;
Sometimes young, sometimes old.


Once he became Noah & drowned the world with his prayer;
He himself went to the ship.

Once he became Abraham and went through the fire;
The fire was transformed to a garden because of him.

He became Joseph and sent his coat from Egypt;
Which illuminated the world.

Came out like light from Jacob’s eyes;
Then eyes got perfect vision.

He is the vessel, he is its maker, and he is the clay used to make it;
He is the reveler quaffing drinking from it.

He too is the one who buys it;
breaks it, and left away.

No! No! He was Himself! Coming and going;
Every century, what you have seen.

At end He arrives as an Arab (PBUP)
And Became the sovereign of universe.

Rumi has never denied the truth, nor he does;
He is not a disbeliever.
I was singing a farsi shabad of Guru Nanak (Chilmil Bisyaar) and did some research on what Bisyaar means (बिसयारبسیار abundant, in plenty. अधिक, प्रचुर, बहुल, बहुत।).  I also looked up urdu, kashmiri and farsi poetry, and found the word in one of Amir Khusrau's farsi poem's that I have heard before and written about before (Man Tu Shudam). What in urdu/hindi we say "bahut khoob," Khusrau uses "bisyaar khubaan" (see second couplet below). According to a reader of the blog, khubaan is apparently the plural of khoob.

Below in this blog I discuss how sufi teachers stay within the bounds of the holy Qur'an. I also discuss the full naat/ghazal of Amir Khusraw.




The Face of the Beloved: How Sufi Teachers Reflect the Qur’an

At first glance, the poetry of Sufi masters like Amir Khusrau appears to hover dangerously close to heresy. They speak of beloveds with divine faces, of wine and intoxication, of oneness that blurs the boundary between self and God. Yet the more closely one listens—not with suspicion, but with the heart—the more clearly one hears the echoes of the Qur'an in every metaphor, sigh, and song.

This is not rebellion. It is return.

The Sufi tradition does not step outside of Islam. Rather, it steps inside—into its most intimate, trembling core. If the Qur'an is a vast ocean, then Sufism is the diver who descends beyond the surface, bringing up pearls shaped like longing, love, and disappearance.


Signs Upon Signs

In Surah Fussilat (41:53), God declares:

“We will show them Our signs upon the horizons and within themselves, until it becomes clear to them that He is the Truth.”

This verse becomes the cornerstone of Sufi perception. For Amir Khusrau, the face of the beloved is such a sign—a mirror reflecting not merely beauty, but the Source of all beauty. When he writes:

“O your beautiful face is the envy of Azar’s idols…”
“Even as I praise you, your beauty surpasses description…”

he is not worshipping the form. He is reading it—like a verse, a sign (āyah). Just as a reciter of the Qur'an chants the written revelation, the Sufi beholds the living revelation in creation: a flower, a gaze, a moment, a beloved.


Wherever You Turn

The Qur’an says:

“To God belong the East and the West—wherever you turn, there is the face of God.”
— Surah al-Baqarah (2:115)

Sufi poetry, with its obsession over the beloved’s eyes, lips, and form, is not idolatry but recognition—that the Divine face is everywhere. The Prophet Muhammad (peace be upon him) is reported to have said, “God is beautiful and loves beauty.” Sufis do not turn away from the world to find God. They turn through it.

The face of the beloved—whether human or symbolic—is not an object of attachment but a threshold. It shatters the illusion of separation. It becomes, in the words of Rumi, “a candle in whose light the moth burns itself.”


Oneness and Annihilation

Perhaps the most controversial aspect of Sufi thought is the idea of oneness—fanā, or annihilation of the self in God. In Khusrau’s couplet:

“I became you, you became me; I became the body, you the soul...”
“So none can say thereafter: I am one thing, and you another.”

We hear the echo of Surah Hadid (57:3):

“He is the First and the Last, the Manifest and the Hidden.”

The Sufi does not claim to be God in essence. Rather, the Sufi claims that nothing remains of their ego—no “I” separate from the Divine. This is consistent with the Qur’anic idea that God is the only enduring reality:

“Everything will perish except His Face.”
— Surah al-Qasas (28:88)

This is not arrogance; it is disappearance.


Love in the Qur’an

A common critique is that the Qur’an does not emphasize love. But this is a misreading.

“He loves them, and they love Him.”
— Surah al-Ma’idah (5:54)

Sufis take this verse not metaphorically but as the deepest truth. God is not a distant lawgiver alone; He is a Beloved, yearning for His lovers. The Qur’an, after all, repeatedly uses the word “Wadūd”—the Most Loving.

The language of the lover and the beloved, found throughout Sufi poetry, is thus Qur’anic in spirit. It makes audible what the heart already knows.


Wine, Beauty, Music: Language of the Heart

When Sufis speak of wine, they refer to intoxication with remembrance, not literal drink. When they dance or sing, it is not hedonism but zikr—the sacred act of remembering God. The Qur’an does not condemn poetry or music outright; it condemns that which distracts from truth. Sufi practice uses poetry and melody to draw the soul toward the Real.

As Rumi says:

“Listen to the reed flute’s song, lamenting the pain of separation…”

It is not music that is the danger—it is forgetting.


The Qur'an as Ocean, Sufism as Love’s Dive

Sufi teachers like Amir Khusrau are not speaking outside Islam. They are whispering from within it—from its deepest chambers, where love and longing mingle with silence and flame. Their metaphors may unsettle those who cling only to surface meanings. And sometimes Sufi teachers have had to pay the ultimate price for doing so.  But for those willing to listen with the inner ear, the message is the same as the Qur’an’s:

That God is near.
That beauty is a sign.
That love is the path.
And that the seeker and the Sought are already bound
by something older than time.

As Khusrau ends his ghazal with a plea:

“Khusrau is a stranger, fallen in your city…
Perhaps, for God’s sake, you might glance upon the poor.”

This is no different from the prayer of every Prophet, every saint, every heart:

“Guide us to the straight path.”


Translation and Discussion

1.

ai chehra-e-zebā-e-tū rashk-e-butān-e-āzarī
har-chand vasfat mī-kunam dar husn zaañ bālā-tarī
O your beautiful face is the envy of Azar’s idols
Though I praise you, your beauty surpasses even my description

Meaning: Your beauty is so divine that it outshines even the famed idols crafted by Azar (the father of Prophet Abraham, known for idol-making). Even as I try to praise your beauty, I fall short—your radiance is beyond praise.


2.

tū az parī chābuk-tarī vaz barg-e-gul nāzuk-tarī
vaz har-che goyam behtarī haqqā ajā.ib dilbarī
You are swifter than fairies, more delicate than a rose petal
And whatever I say, you are still better—you are truly a wondrous beloved

Meaning: You defy all comparisons—faster than angels, more tender than flowers. No matter how extravagant the metaphors, they don’t capture the marvel that you are. You are a miracle of love and beauty.


3.

tā-naqsh mī-bandad falak hargiz nadāda iiñ namak
huure na-dānam yā malak farzand-e-ādam yā parī
Since the heavens first drew figures, they never granted such grace
I don’t know—are you a houri, an angel, a child of Adam, or a fairy?

Meaning: Since creation began, nothing like you has appeared. You transcend the boundaries of category: neither purely divine nor entirely mortal—you are something inexplicably in between.


4.

a.alam hama yaġhmā-e-tū ḳhalqe hama shaidā-e-tū
aañ nargis-e-shahlā-e-tū āvurda rasm-e-kāfirī
The whole world is your plunder, and people are madly in love with you
Your intoxicating eyes have introduced the custom of infidelity

Meaning: Your charm has conquered all hearts, turning even the faithful into lovers of the mortal. The "nargis" (narcissus-like eyes) have such allure that they make people forsake reason and tradition.


5.

āfāq-hā gardīda-am mehr-e-butāñ varzīda-am
bisyār ḳhūbāñ dīda-am lekin tu chīze dīgarī
I have wandered the world, worshipped many idols
Seen countless beauties—but you are something entirely other

Meaning: This couplet emphasizes the uniqueness of the beloved. The poet has seen much, sought love everywhere, and yet finds in this one figure something unparalleled—a "chīze dīgarī" (something else altogether).


6.

ai rāhat-o-ārām-e-jāñ bā qadd chuuñ sarv-e-ravāñ
zīnsāñ marau dāman-kashāñ kārām-e-jānam mī-parī
O comfort and peace of my soul, with your cypress-like flowing form
Do not leave like this pulling your hem—I am the task of your soul, O angel

Meaning: Here, the speaker pleads with the beloved not to abandon him. The beloved’s graceful form is compared to a flowing cypress tree, and the poet begs: don’t walk away, for I belong to you, like soul to body.


7.

man tū shudam tū man shudī man tan shudam tū jaañ shudī
tā kas na-goyad ba.ad aziiñ man dīgaram tū dīgarī
I became you, you became me; I turned into the body, you the soul
So no one can say after this: I am one thing, and you another

Meaning: This is the spiritual climax. The merging of the lover and beloved—of self and Divine—so completely that all duality vanishes. It echoes the mystical theme of fanā (dissolution of the self in the Beloved).


8.

'ḳhusrau' ġharībast-o-gadā uftāda dar shahr-e-shumā
bāshad ki az bahr-e-ḳhudā sū-e-ġharībāñ bañgarī
Khusrau is a poor, fallen stranger in your city
Perhaps, for God’s sake, you might glance upon this poor one

Meaning: A humble ending, where the poet (Khusrau) pleads for grace. Having spoken of love and union, he still bows in surrender. This last verse returns to the classic ghazal tradition of ending with the poet's name and a final cry for mercy or attention.




Poem by Khusro


Ay chehra-e zeba-e tu rashk-e-butaan-e aazari
Har chand wasfat mikunam dar husn zaan baalaatari.

Aafaq ra gar deedah am mehr-e butan warzeedah am;
Bisyaar khubaan deedah am lekin tu cheez-e deegari.

Man tu shudam, tu man shudi, man tan shudam, tu jan shudi;
Taakas nagoyad baad azeen man deegaram tu deegari.

Khusrau ghareeb ast-o gada uftadah dar shehr-e shuma;
Baashad ki az behr-e khuda, su-e ghareeban bangari.

(trans. Dr. Hadi Hasan)


O you whose beautiful face is the envy of the idols of Azar
(Abraham's father and famous idol maker);
You remain superior to my praise.

All over the world have I traveled; many a maiden’s love have I tasted;
Many a beauty-star have I seen; but you are something unique.

I have become you, and you me; I have become the body, you the soul; 
So that none hereafter may say that “I am someone and you someone else.”

Khusro a beggar, a stranger has come wandering to your town;
For the sake of god, have pity on this beggar and do not turn him away from your door.


Another trans by Dukhiram


O Thou whose beautiful face is envy of the idols of Azar (Abraham's father and image engraver of antiquity);
Thou remainst every moment superior to any praise of mine.

The mask maker who makes visages, if he saw Thine visage
The dryness of his past choices would make him start all over

Thou Queen of Fairies, bouquets of flowers pale beside Thee
Neither Sun nor Moon can match Thee, Resplendent  Thou, Jupiter Thou

All over the world have I traveled; many a maiden’s love have I tasted;
Many a beauteous star have I seen; but Thou art unique.

I am become Thou, Thou me; I am become the body, Thou the soul;
So that none hereafter may say “I am I and Thou are Thou. (i.e. someone else)”

Khusrau a beggar, a stranger has come wandering to your town;
For sake of God's Ocean, pity the poor, turn him not from the door.


A longer version of this poem:


ai chehra-e-zebā-e-tū rashk-e-butān-e-āzarī 
har-chand vasfat mī-kunam dar husn zaañ bālā-tarī 

tū az parī chābuk-tarī vaz barg-e-gul nāzuk-tarī 
vaz har-che goyam behtarī haqqā ajā.ib dilbarī 

tā-naqsh mī-bandad falak hargiz nadāda iiñ namak 
huure na-dānam yā malak farzand-e-ādam yā parī 

a.alam hama yaġhmā-e-tū ḳhalqe hama shaidā-e-tū 
aañ nargis-e-shahlā-e-tū āvurda rasm-e-kāfirī 

āfāq-hā gardīda-am mehr-e-butāñ varzīda-am 
bisyār ḳhūbāñ dīda-am lekin tu chīze dīgarī 

ai rāhat-o-ārām-e-jāñ bā qadd chuuñ sarv-e-ravāñ 
zīnsāñ marau dāman-kashāñ kārām-e-jānam mī-parī 

man tū shudam tū man shudī man tan shudam tū jaañ shudī 
tā kas na-goyad ba.ad aziiñ man dīgaram tū dīgarī 

'ḳhusrau' ġharībast-o-gadā uftāda dar shahr-e-shumā 
bāshad ki az bahr-e-ḳhudā sū-e-ġharībāñ bañgarī 
This is a poem by Rumi that my cellist friend Suellen Primost repeats often.  The following insightful post about this poem was written by Cyrus Mu here: https://equanimitysite.wordpress.com/2012/12/15/rumi-out-beyond-the-ideas/


“Out beyond ideas of wrongdoing and rightdoing,

there is a field. I’ll meet you there.
When the soul lies down in that grass,
the world is too full to talk about.

Ideas, language, even the phrase each other
doesn’t make any sense.”

Above is Rumi’s poem as translated by Coleman Barks. This is actually called a rubai, a poem of 4 lines where lines 1,2 and 4 have ends rhyming.



Below is the Original Rumi’s poem in Pharsi (Persian) :

از کفر و ز اسلام برون صحرائی است
ما را به میان آن فضا سودائی است
عارف چو بدان رسید سر را بنهد
نه کفر و نه اسلام و نه آنجا جائی است

The Persian word سودا means “Exchanging Goods” and in this context it means exchanging ideas or dialogue.

Here is Cyrus’ interpretation of Rumi’s Persian poem where he replaced the word “Islam” with “faith” and the word “field” with “meadow”

Beyond the realm of heresy and faith there is a meadow
Within that space, we each have understandings to bestow
When the sage reaches that juncture, he’ll rest all his conjecture
Since neither heresy, nor faith, not even that place, any longer has a place

“A true understanding can be achieved through a dialogue (meeting) in a field where at the outset there is no preconceived precepts of what is right & what is wrong.”

This means to really understand each other we need to start the dialogue with a clean slate, where there are no biases and nothing is right or wrong to begin with; where everything just “is”, exists, as phenomenon that occurs in nature. This does not mean that as we engage in dialogue we can not come-up with principals of right or wrong that serves everyone (humanity in general) and not just a particular group or inner-circle

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