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Among the many ways the Laavaan have been understood, I have been drawn to one that follows the movement of Guru Ram Das's own words.

The first step is parvirti—a turning homeward, a rooting in wisdom, remembrance, and dharam that prepares the soul for what is to come. The second is milaya, meeting. Through the meeting with the True Guru, fear and ego begin to fall away. The eyes are transformed. The Divine is seen everywhere, and the unstruck Song begins to resound within. The third step is chao—the awakening of longing. This is not the desire to possess, but the desire to know, to grow, and to remain in the presence of the Beloved. Love ripens into yearning. The fourth step is getting to eternal love in sahaj—through intuitive ease. The restless search begins to quiet. The heart's deepest longing is fulfilled not through striving, but through trust, presence, and an undying rest.

I realize this is very different from the translations you have seen. I have tried to focus on the etymologies of words in the laavan - parvirti for instance means a turning around, and not family (it is not related to the word parivar which means family, but par + vriti, the other direction literally).  Read in the way of the words' etymology, the Laavaan describe a beautiful progression of the soul: turning, meeting, longing, and resting. This journey belongs to every soul-bride, every seeker of love. What follows is a translation shaped by this vision, followed by a note I wrote about how relevant this poem is in current times.


First Laav

ਹਰਿ ਪਹਿਲੜੀ ਲਾਵ ਪਰਵਿਰਤੀ ਕਰਮ ਦ੍ਰਿੜਾਇਆ ਬਲਿ ਰਾਮ ਜੀਉ ॥
Har pahilṛī lāv parviratī karam driṛāiā bali rām jīu.
In the first step, Hari turns us homeward.


ਬਾਣੀ ਬ੍ਰਹਮਾ ਵੇਦੁ ਧਰਮੁ ਦ੍ਰਿੜਹੁ ਪਾਪ ਤਜਾਇਆ ਬਲਿ ਰਾਮ ਜੀਉ ॥
Bāṇī brahmā vedu dharamu driṛahu pāp tajāiā bali rām jīu.
Root yourself in wisdom, in song, in dharam; release what pulls you away.


ਧਰਮੁ ਦ੍ਰਿੜਹੁ ਹਰਿ ਨਾਮੁ ਧਿਆਵਹੁ ਸਿਮ੍ਰਿਤਿ ਨਾਮੁ ਦ੍ਰਿੜਾਇਆ ॥
Dharamu driṛahu hari nāmu dhiāvahu simriti nāmu driṛāiā.
Stand firm in dharam, remember the Name, and let remembrance deepen.


ਸਤਿਗੁਰੁ ਗੁਰੁ ਪੂਰਾ ਆਰਾਧਹੁ ਸਭਿ ਕਿਲਵਿਖ ਪਾਪ ਗਵਾਇਆ ॥
Satiguru guru pūrā ārādhahu sabhi kilavikh pāp gavāiā.
Cherish the True Guru, and the burdens of the past fall away.


ਸਹਜ ਅਨੰਦੁ ਹੋਆ ਵਡਭਾਗੀ ਮਨਿ ਹਰਿ ਹਰਿ ਮੀਠਾ ਲਾਇਆ ॥
Sahaj anandu hoā vaḍbhāgī mani hari hari mīṭhā lāiā.
Then bliss arises naturally, and Hari becomes sweet to the heart.


ਜਨੁ ਕਹੈ ਨਾਨਕੁ ਲਾਵ ਪਹਿਲੀ ਆਰੰਭੁ ਕਾਜੁ ਰਚਾਇਆ ॥੧॥
Janu kahai nānaku lāv pahilī ārambhu kāju racāiā.
Says Nanak: this is the first step—the journey begins.


Second Laav

ਹਰਿ ਦੂਜੜੀ ਲਾਵ ਸਤਿਗੁਰੁ ਪੁਰਖੁ ਮਿਲਾਇਆ ਬਲਿ ਰਾਮ ਜੀਉ ॥
Har dūjṛī lāv satiguru purakhu milāiā bali rām jīu.
In the second step, you meet the True Guru.


ਨਿਰਭਉ ਭੈ ਮਨੁ ਹੋਇ ਹਉਮੈ ਮੈਲੁ ਗਵਾਇਆ ਬਲਿ ਰਾਮ ਜੀਉ ॥
Nirbhau bhai manu hoi haumai mailu gavāiā bali rām jīu.
Fear gives way to fearlessness, and the dust of ego is washed away.


ਨਿਰਮਲੁ ਭਉ ਪਾਇਆ ਹਰਿ ਗੁਣ ਗਾਇਆ ਹਰਿ ਵੇਖੈ ਰਾਮੁ ਹਦੂਰੇ ॥
Niramalu bhau pāiā hari guṇ gāiā hari vekhai rāmu hadūre.
Pure awe awakens, you sing Hari's virtues, and you see Ram before you.


ਹਰਿ ਆਤਮ ਰਾਮੁ ਪਸਾਰਿਆ ਸੁਆਮੀ ਸਰਬ ਰਹਿਆ ਭਰਪੂਰੇ ॥
Har ātam rāmu pasāriā suāmī sarab rahiā bharapūre.
The Ram within reveals itself as the One present everywhere.


ਅੰਤਰਿ ਬਾਹਰਿ ਹਰਿ ਪ੍ਰਭੁ ਏਕੋ ਮਿਲਿ ਹਰਿ ਜਨ ਮੰਗਲ ਗਾਏ ॥
Antari bāhari hari prabhu eko mili hari jan maṅgal gāe.
Inside and outside, the same One—the lovers of Hari sing songs of joy.


ਜਨ ਨਾਨਕ ਦੂਜੀ ਲਾਵ ਚਲਾਈ ਅਨਹਦ ਸਬਦ ਵਜਾਏ ॥੨॥
Jan nānak dūjī lāv calāī anahad sabad vajāe.
Says Nanak: in the second step, the unstruck Song begins to resound.


Third Laav

ਹਰਿ ਤੀਜੜੀ ਲਾਵ ਮਨਿ ਚਾਉ ਭਇਆ ਬੈਰਾਗੀਆ ਬਲਿ ਰਾਮ ਜੀਉ ॥
Har tījṛī lāv mani cāu bhaiā bairāgīā bali rām jīu.
In the third step, a longing awakens and the heart turns toward Hari alone.


ਸੰਤ ਜਨਾ ਹਰਿ ਮੇਲੁ ਹਰਿ ਪਾਇਆ ਵਡਭਾਗੀਆ ਬਲਿ ਰਾਮ ਜੀਉ ॥
Sant janā hari melu hari pāiā vaḍbhāgīā bali rām jīu.
Through the company of saints, Hari is found—a rare blessing.


ਨਿਰਮਲੁ ਹਰਿ ਪਾਇਆ ਹਰਿ ਗੁਣ ਗਾਇਆ ਮੁਖਿ ਬੋਲੀ ਹਰਿ ਬਾਣੀ ॥
Niramalu hari pāiā hari guṇ gāiā mukhi bolī hari bāṇī.
The Pure One is found, His praises are sung, and the tongue speaks Hari's song.


ਸੰਤ ਜਨਾ ਵਡਭਾਗੀ ਪਾਇਆ ਹਰਿ ਕਥੀਐ ਅਕਥ ਕਹਾਣੀ ॥
Sant janā vaḍbhāgī pāiā hari kathīai akath kahāṇī.
Blessed is the meeting with saints—together they speak the unspeakable.


ਹਿਰਦੈ ਹਰਿ ਹਰਿ ਹਰਿ ਧੁਨਿ ਉਪਜੀ ਹਰਿ ਜਪੀਐ ਮਸਤਕਿ ਭਾਗੁ ਜੀਉ ॥
Hiradai hari hari hari dhuni upajī hari japīai masataki bhāgu jīu.
Within the heart, Hari, Hari, Hari resounds—destiny unfolds.


ਜਨੁ ਨਾਨਕੁ ਬੋਲੇ ਤੀਜੀ ਲਾਵੈ ਹਰਿ ਉਪਜੈ ਮਨਿ ਬੈਰਾਗੁ ਜੀਉ ॥੩॥
Janu nāku bole tījī lāvai hari upjai mani bairāgu jīu.
Says Nanak: in the third step, love deepens into longing.


Fourth Laav

ਹਰਿ ਚਉਥੜੀ ਲਾਵ ਮਨਿ ਸਹਜੁ ਭਇਆ ਹਰਿ ਪਾਇਆ ਬਲਿ ਰਾਮ ਜੀਉ ॥
Har cauthṛī lāv mani sahaju bhaiā hari pāiā bali rām jīu.
In the fourth step, the mind comes to rest—Hari is found.


ਗੁਰਮੁਖਿ ਮਿਲਿਆ ਸੁਭਾਇ ਹਰਿ ਮਨਿ ਤਨਿ ਮੀਠਾ ਲਾਇਆ ਬਲਿ ਰਾਮ ਜੀਉ ॥
Guramukhi miliā subhāi hari mani tani mīṭhā lāiā bali rām jīu.
Through the Guru's way, meeting happens naturally—Hari becomes sweet to body and soul.


ਹਰਿ ਮੀਠਾ ਲਾਇਆ ਮੇਰੇ ਪ੍ਰਭ ਭਾਇਆ ਅਨਦਿਨੁ ਹਰਿ ਲਿਵ ਲਾਈ ॥
Har mīṭhā lāiā mere prabh bhāiā anadinu hari liv lāī.
Hari is sweet, the Beloved is pleased—day and night, attention rests in Him.


ਮਨ ਚਿੰਦਿਆ ਫਲੁ ਪਾਇਆ ਸੁਆਮੀ ਹਰਿ ਨਾਮਿ ਵਜੀ ਵਾਧਾਈ ॥
Man cindiā phalu pāiā suāmī hari nāmi vajī vādhāī.
The heart's desire comes to fruition—the Name rings out in celebration.


ਹਰਿ ਪ੍ਰਭਿ ਠਾਕੁਰਿ ਕਾਜੁ ਰਚਾਇਆ ਧਨ ਹਿਰਦੈ ਨਾਮਿ ਵਿਗਾਸੀ ॥
Har prabhi ṭhākuri kāju racāiā dhan hiradai nāmi vigāsī.
The union is fulfilled—the bride's heart blooms in the Naam.


ਜਨੁ ਨਾਨਕੁ ਬੋਲੇ ਚਉਥੀ ਲਾਵੈ ਹਰਿ ਪਾਇਆ ਪ੍ਰਭੁ ਅਵਿਨਾਸੀ ॥੪॥੨॥
Janu nānaku bole cauthī lāvai hari pāiā prabhu avināsī.
Says Nanak: in the fourth step, the eternal hari/prabhu/love is found.


What does this have to do with us now?

In modern love, we already know these four steps, even if we have never read the Laavaan. Think of how it begins: a woman dresses up, prepares herself, turns her attention toward love, and hopes to attract someone she truly desires. She primps and preens, not out of vanity, but because she is readying herself for the meeting. That is the first step—parviratī, a turning toward the beloved, a rooting in the hope that something beautiful is about to begin.

Then she meets him. There are butterflies, a flutter in the chest, a feeling that the world has suddenly become more vibrant. Every glance feels charged, every word carries weight. She cannot quite explain it, but something inside her knows this is significant. That is the second step—milāiā, the meeting. The unstruck sound begins to play, not as something heard with the ears, but as something felt in the bones. It is the music of new love, the harbinger of the bliss to come.

As the relationship deepens, she finds herself missing him when he is not around. She thinks of him constantly, longs for his presence, and cannot imagine her days without him. This is not weakness; it is the heart recognizing that it has found something worth holding onto. That is the third step—man chāo, the longing that awakens in the heart, the desire to keep being with the beloved, to know them more fully, to grow alongside them.

And then, finally, there comes a day when she no longer has to perform. The makeup comes off, the pretenses fall away, and she is simply herself. She knows, with a quiet and unshakable confidence, that she is loved exactly as she is. She does not have to earn it, prove it, or fight for it. It is simply there. That is the fourth step—man sahaj, the intuitive ease of resting in love, the fulfillment of the heart's deepest desire. This is what Guru Ram Das is teaching us: that the journey of the soul toward the Divine is no different from the journey of the heart toward true love. And in both, the destination is the same—the quiet, certain knowledge that we are home.

In May, 2026 we released a new shabad. It is in collaboration with Anshmeet Singh, a budding videographer from India who made a beautiful video to go along with this shabad which I have been working on for the past year.

In the great epic of the Mahabharata, a simple yet piercing moment unfolds. Krishna arrives in the kingdom where Duryodhana rules with power, wealth, and unquestioned authority. The palace is prepared, the finest arrangements are made, and the expectation is clear: the Divine will surely come where greatness has been assembled. Yet Krishna does not go there. Instead, he walks quietly to the humble dwelling of Vidura, a man without status or display, whose home is small but whose heart is open. When Duryodhan hears of this, he is unsettled, even offended. How could the Divine leave grandeur for simplicity? How could a hut be chosen over a palace?


This shabad by Bhai Gurdas teaches us how to invite divinity home. Lets take one line at a time:

ਆਇਆ ਸੁਣਿਆ ਬਿਦਰ ਦੇ ਬੋਲੈ ਦੁਰਜੋਧਨੁ ਹੋਇ ਰੁਖਾ।

Duryodhan hears that the Divine has gone to Vidur’s home, but his hearing is dry, sharp, and reactive. This is the first fracture: hearing without bhaav. In bhagati, listening is not the movement of the ear but the softening of the mind. The “ghar” here is already being tested—what kind of house is it if it cannot receive without comparison? A house without love becomes a place of noise, even if filled with knowledge.

ਘਰਿ ਅਸਾਡੇ ਛਡਿ ਕੈ ਗੋਲੇ ਦੇ ਘਰਿ ਜਾਹਿ ਕਿ ਸੁਖਾ।

He questions why the Divine would leave a palace for a servant’s hut. Here, “ghar” becomes externalized—measured in size, wealth, comfort. But bhagati reverses this. The true house is not built of walls but of bhaav. Where love resides, that is the dwelling. A palace without love is empty; a hut with love becomes vast. The Divine does not move toward luxury—it moves toward warmth.

ਭੀਖਮੁ ਦੋਣਾ ਕਰਣ ਤਜਿ ਸਭਾ ਸੀਗਾਰ ਵਡੇ ਮਾਨੁਖਾ।

Duryodhan lists the great names—Bhishma, Drona, Karna—men adorned in courts, recognized, accomplished. This is the house of reputation, the architecture of recognition. But bhagati does not gather around greatness as the world defines it. It gathers where humility allows listening. The more a house fills itself with status, the less space remains for bhaav.

ਝੁੰਗੀ ਜਾਇ ਵਲਾਇਓਨੁ ਸਭਨਾ ਦੇ ਜੀਅ ਅੰਦਰਿ ਧੁਖਾ।

He says they are pained that the Divine chose a hut. Yet this pain is not the dissolving pain of bhagati—it is the tightening pain of ego. True bhagati, as we saw, sends pain away and brings sukh into the house. But here, the house produces more suffering because it is built on comparison and pride. A house without bhaav cannot hold peace.

ਹਸਿ ਬੋਲੇ ਭਗਵਾਨ ਜੀ ਸੁਣਿਹੋ ਰਾਜਾ ਹੋਇ ਸਨਮੁਖਾ।

The Divine smiles and invites the king to come closer and listen. This is always the gesture: come near, not in position, but in awareness. The house of bhagati begins here—not in argument, but in listening. To come “sanmukh” is to turn inward, to face what is true. The Guru’s path always begins by asking us to listen again, but this time with love.

ਤੇਰੇ ਭਾਉ ਨ ਦਿਸਈ ਮੇਰੇ ਨਾਹੀ ਅਪਦਾ ਦੁਖਾ।

“I do not see bhaav in you.” This is not condemnation—it is clarity. Without bhaav, there is no meeting. The Divine is not absent out of refusal, but because there is no space to dwell. The house is closed. Bhagatī is not technique; it is the opening of the inner house. Where there is no love, the doors remain shut, even if rituals are performed inside.

ਭਾਉ ਜਿਵੇਹਾ ਬਿਦਰ ਦੇ ਹੋਰੀ ਦੇ ਚਿਤਿ ਚਾਉ ਨ ਚੁਖਾ।

“No one holds love like Vidur.” Now the contrast becomes luminous. Vidur’s house is small, but his heart is expansive. His ghar is made of attention, humility, and welcome. This is bhaav bhagat: not singing alone, but singing that listens; not offering things, but offering oneself. His house does not try to impress—it simply receives.

ਗੋਬਿੰਦ ਭਾਉ ਭਗਤਿ ਦਾ ਭੁਖਾ ॥੭॥

Gobind is hungry—for bhaav bhagati. This hunger is not for food, not for wealth, not for performance. It is for that state where singing, listening, and loving become one movement. The true house is wherever this happens. When you give your time, when you listen with love, when you dissolve comparison—that is where the Divine arrives, because that is where it is already welcome.

Not Just a Story

In the end, these figures are not just from story—they are within us. Krishna represents the living presence of the Divine, always moving toward love. Vidura is the part of us that is humble, open, and quietly devoted—the inner house prepared with bhaav. Duryodhana is the part that seeks recognition, compares, and tries to host the Divine through status rather than sincerity. Bhagati, as revealed through Guru Nanak, is the movement from Duryodhan to Vidur—from outer house to inner house, from performance to presence, from singing alone to singing, listening, and holding love. That is the house where Gobind dwells.


Following the Daisy Because Love is Sweet - Reflecting Upon Emily Dickinson

The Daisy follows soft the Sun –
And when his golden walk is done –
Sits shily at his feet –
He – waking – finds the flower there –
Wherefore – Marauder – art thou here?
Because, Sir, love is sweet!

We are the Flower – Thou the Sun!
Forgive us, if as days decline –
We nearer steal to Thee!
Enamored of the parting West –
The peace – the flight – the amethyst –
Night’s possibility!

- Emily Dickinson

Standing here among the damp April grass, I watch the daisies turn their faces toward the sun. They are doing what flowers have always done—following light—but today, because of Emily Dickinson, I cannot see it as mere botany. The small white petals are a kind of courtship. The whole garden is a conversation. The whole garden is a trade. Come, beloved, where are you?

“The Daisy follows soft the Sun,” Emily writes, and the word soft does something unexpected. Does it refer to the daisy, the sun or the following? Let us for an instant think it is the following—the quality of attention, the tenderness of a creature that positions itself not to demand but to be near. This is not pursuit; it is devotion conducted at the proper distance. The daisy waits through the golden arc of the sun’s labor, and when his walk is done, she “Sits shily at his feet.” (I am assuming that's how she spells shyly). The line break suspends her there, in that posture of waiting, of hoping to be noticed without presuming. It suspends me too.

But notice does come. Emily stages a dawn reunion so delicate it reads like a waking dream. Perhaps on rising the sun finds her there, and his question—“Wherefore—Marauder—art thou here?”—is not quite anger. The word marauder is almost playful, a mock-accusation that contains its own forgiveness. A true marauder does not sit shyly; a true marauder does not wait all night at your feet. The daisy’s answer is disarmingly simple: “Because, Sir, love is sweet!” There is no elaborate defense, no philosophy. Just sweetness. Just the irreducible fact of affection.

And then the poem does something breathtaking. It shifts from third person to first, from observation to confession. “We are the Flower—Thou the Sun!” Suddenly I am no longer watching daisies. I am implicated. We are all implicated. The poem has been a prayer disguised as a fable, and now the veil lifts. We are the ones who follow, who steal nearer as the light declines. We are the ones enamored of endings.

This is where Emily becomes unbearable in the best way. The poem could have ended with “love is sweet”—it is complete, it is satisfied. But she pushes further, into the twilight we usually try to avoid. “Forgive us, if as days decline— / We nearer steal to Thee!” The movement toward the beloved is also a movement toward disappearance. The “parting West” is both the sunset and the horizon of mortality. The “amethyst” is that impossible color between day and night, presence and absence. And then the final phrase—“Night’s possibility!”—hovers there, both terrifying and tender. It is the same word she uses elsewhere when she says she “dwells in Possibility”—as if the fading light opens more rooms than noon ever could. Dickinson does not insist on the end; she only acknowledges that it might be coming, and that this knowledge sharpens devotion until it is almost unbearable. This would be sung in Raag Asa because it is in between, and it is all about love. The daisy follows the sun, like we follow Emily's words, those soft daisies, 

I look down at the daisies again. They are still following the sun, but now I understand that they are not naïve. They know the sun sets. They know night comes. They steal nearer anyway. This is what it means to love in full knowledge of loss—the fleetingness itself sharpening the sweetness until it is almost unbearable. The flower does not ask to be saved from evening. It asks only to be forgiven for wanting to be near the light until the very last moment.

Emily, like any ancient bard, understood that the smallest things—a daisy, a sunset, a word spoken in the morning—could hold the whole weight of what we are too afraid to say directly. So she says it slant, through flowers and suns and shy petitioners. And now, kneeling here in the grass, I find myself saying it too: Because, Sir, love is sweet. And because the sweetness does not last, but while it does, we follow.

I am reading a poem by Faiz today. He was in prison when he wrote this, and this poem has the fragrance of freedom. Guru Nanak talks about freedom at the end of Japji Sahib. Those who remember the name walk around with resplendent faces and they are also the ones who have found freedom, despite being imprisoned in this body on this earth. 




Let me introduce the poem, then let's read it and talk about it as well. 

This is a poem that moves like evening itself—slowly folding, dissolving, turning the visible world into something inward. It belongs to that tradition in Urdu-Hindi poetry where twilight is not just a time of day but a state of being: a threshold between separation and union, ظلم (oppression) and possibility, memory and presence. The language is lush with Persianized compounds—पेच-ओ-ख़म, दामन-ए-आसमाँ, दर्द-ए-फ़िराक़—and yet what it gestures toward is deeply intimate: the feeling that even in a wounded world, beauty keeps quietly assembling itself.

What makes this poem powerful is that it never argues hope—it renders it. The sky, the prison courtyard, the trees, the light, the shadows—all of them participate in a kind of silent resistance. By the time we reach the final lines, the poem has shifted from observation to defiance, but so gently that we hardly notice when seeing becomes believing.


Original Poem by Faiz

ज़िंदाँ की एक शाम

शाम के पेच-ओ-ख़म सितारों से
ज़ीना ज़ीना उतर रही है रात

यूँ सबा पास से गुज़रती है
जैसे कह दी किसी ने प्यार की बात

सेहन-ए-ज़िंदाँ के बे-वतन अश्जार
सर-निगूँ महव हैं बनाने में

दामन-ए-आसमाँ पे नक़्श-ओ-निगार
शाना-ए-बाम पर दमकता है

मेहरबाँ चाँदनी का दस्त-ए-जमील
ख़ाक में घुल गई है आब-ए-नुजूम

नूर में घुल गया है अर्श का नील
सब्ज़ गोशों में नील-गूँ साए

लहलहाते हैं जिस तरह दिल में
मौज-ए-दर्द-ए-फ़िराक़-ए-यार आए

दिल से पैहम ख़याल कहता है
इतनी शीरीं है ज़िंदगी इस पल

ज़ुल्म का ज़हर घोलने वाले
कामराँ हो सकेंगे आज न कल

जल्वा-गाह-ए-विसाल की शमएँ
वो बुझा भी चुके अगर तो क्या

चाँद को गुल करें तो हम जानें


Translation

An Evening in the Prison

The tangled curves of evening—
night descends, step by step,
from the stars.

The breeze passes close by
as if someone has just
whispered love.

In the prison courtyard, the rootless trees
bow their heads, absorbed
in becoming.

Across the sky’s hem, patterns emerge,
and along the rooftop’s edge
something glimmers.

The gentle hand of moonlight—
the water of stars dissolves
into dust.

The blue of the heavens melts into light,
and in green corners, bluish shadows
begin to sway—

the way, inside the heart,
waves of the pain of separation
rise and tremble.

From within, a thought repeats:
life is so sweet
in this very moment—

those who stir poison into oppression
will not prevail,
not today, not ever.

Even if they have extinguished
the lamps of union—
what of it?

Let them try
to put out the moon.


The Best Lines — and Why They Stay

The opening: “शाम के पेच-ओ-ख़म सितारों से / ज़ीना ज़ीना उतर रही है रात” is extraordinary because it refuses a flat description of evening. “पेच-ओ-ख़म” (twists and turns) gives dusk a physical, almost calligraphic texture, and “ज़ीना ज़ीना” (step by step) turns night into a descent you can feel. It is not a sky changing color—it is something arriving, deliberately, like a quiet procession. The line teaches us how to look.

“यूँ सबा पास से गुज़रती है / जैसे कह दी किसी ने प्यार की बात” is deceptively simple, but this is where the poem softens the world. The breeze becomes intimate speech. Nothing dramatic happens, and yet everything changes: the external world is suddenly capable of carrying affection. This is classic subcontinental poetics—turning atmosphere into emotion without announcing it.

The image of “सेहन-ए-ज़िंदाँ के बे-वतन अश्जार”—rootless trees in a prison courtyard—is one of the most layered moments. These are trees that belong nowhere, yet they are “महव हैं बनाने में”—absorbed in becoming, in making themselves. Even in confinement, life is not static. There is a quiet metaphysics here: growth does not ask permission.

Then comes the heart of the poem:
“लहलहाते हैं जिस तरह दिल में / मौज-ए-दर्द-ए-फ़िराक़-ए-यार आए”.
The pain of separation is not described as heaviness, but as waves, even as something that sways or ripples. Pain is alive, moving, almost fertile. This is where the poem turns inward—everything we saw outside (shadows, movement, dissolving light) now mirrors the interior landscape.

The philosophical pivot happens in:
“इतनी शीरीं है ज़िंदगी इस पल”.
This is not naïve optimism. It arrives after images of prison, exile, and separation. The sweetness is not because suffering is absent—it is because life persists despite it. That distinction is everything.

And then the ending—quiet, almost playful defiance:
“चाँद को गुल करें तो हम जानें”
—Let them try to extinguish the moon.

This is one of those rare lines that does not raise its voice but still feels like resistance. It does not deny ظلم; it simply places it in proportion. You can put out lamps, perhaps even erase moments of union—but the moon? That is beyond you. The line expands the scale of hope from the human to the cosmic.





Eid Mubarak folks! This morning I woke up and read new poetry from Rattle and this poem was very moving. Here is the original on Rattle: https://rattle.com/dua-for-dervishes-by-michael-cirelli/


Dua for Dervishes
by Michael Cirelli

The crests of his dress
In 3s like sets of waves,
An O on the stage, a groove
Ground by soft leather soles
O perfect circle etched!
O spinning cipher human planet!
O the body void! O null.
Everything the Sufi does
Is for the love of Allah I’m told.
But when the dance was over
He came out smoking a Marlboro
In a cheap pleather jacket
And knockoff Nikes.
His hair flopped limp
On his forehead with each
Overextended inhale.
O the disappointment
As he scrolled on his smartphone,
Earbuds clogging his head
With Katy Perry I now suspect.
O Facebook for the love of Allah!
O fake Nikes for the love of Allah!
O iPhones O iTunes O iClouds
Overhead for the love of Allah.
Roar for the love of Allah!
I ran into my accountant halfway
Around the world that night,
My accountant for the love of Allah.

The poem begins with a Sufi dancer—spinning, sacred, almost cosmic. The kind of image we like to associate with devotion. A body becoming a circle, a human turning into something beyond himself. But then the dance ends.

The guy unexpectedly steps outside, lights a cigarette, scrolls on his phone, earbuds in, wearing knockoffs—completely ordinary. He’s even listening to Katy Perry. Which made me smile. I guess in the reverent it may feel like a a small disappointment, as if the sacred has slipped.

By the end of the poem, we are finding everyone—even an accountant—“for the love of Allah.”

Maybe the point isn’t that the sacred disappeared. Maybe it’s that we were expecting it to look a certain way: clean, elevated, separate.

Which brings me to what I have been meditating on this week. Maya. This is maya—the illusion that the divine lives only in the perfect moment, the perfect person, the perfect posture. Guru Amardas says, “maya viche paya” — what is beyond illusion is found within it. The love of God is discovered through the love of His gifts, welcome and unwelcome.

Those who are praying are human too. They are not finished beings. They are not pure symbols. They are people—smoking, scrolling, stumbling, singing pop songs—still trying to find Allah in the noise, in the mess, in the middle of their lives.

And maybe that is the prayer. To find what is beyond counting in the counting. To glimpse the infinite even in an accountant. To realize that nothing has fallen away— only our idea of what the sacred should look like. And once that illusion loosens, everything begins again “for the love of Allah.”



First Guru Amardas' shabad that has the most elegant definition of Maya in my view. It comes from Anand Sahib (Pauri 29).  Maya is anything that takes us away from our true essence.  Following my interpretation, I am sharing the poems I have written that are inspired by this shabad. 



Finding Joy in a Burning World


In a world that often feels like it is burning—consumed by conflict, ambition, illness, and endless wanting—the search for peace can feel like a search for an exit. We imagine that somewhere there must be a cool, quiet place far away from the heat of life. Escape is not possible. And escape is not needed.  Joy comes from remembering what the fire is for. I have been thinking of this as I reflect on the following words from Guru Amardas (29th of 40 verses in his Verses of Joy): 

Eh māyā 
This is Maaya,

jit har visrai 
by which Hari is forgotten …

moh upjai 
by which greed arises …

bhāo dūjā lāyā
by which duality attaches.


Jaisee agan udar meh taisee bāhar māyā

As is the fire within the womb, so is Maya outside


Māiā agan sabh iko jehee kartai khel rachāyā
The fire of Maya is one and the same the Creator has staged this play


Jā tis bhāṇā tā jamiā parvār bhalā bhāyā
Divine order results in birth and the family is very pleased.



Liv chhuṛkee lagee trisnā māiā amar vartāyā
Love wears off, attachments trap Maya runs limitless


Kahai Nānak gur parsādī jinā liv lāgee tinee viche māyā pāyā
By Guru's Grace, those who are enrapt in love find Hari within Maya

Eh māyā jit har visrai moh upjai bhāo dūjā lāyā
Kahai Nānak gur parsādī jinā liv lāgee tinee viche māyā pāyā


The Shabad begins with a diagnosis of the human condition. Maya—the world of appearances, desires, relationships, ambitions—is the place where the Divine is often forgotten. When remembrance fades, attachment arises and a feeling of separation takes root. But then the Guru introduces a startling image. Maya is compared to fire.

Jaisee agan udar meh taisee bāhar māyā.
The fire outside is the same as the fire within the womb.

This line changes everything. The heat of the womb cooks the body of the unborn child. Without that warmth, nothing forms. Life itself depends on that quiet fire. The Guru is suggesting that the same energy that gives life in the womb also fuels the world outside: desire, creativity, ambition, longing, love. The fire itself is not the enemy.

The problem is forgetfulness. When the Divine is forgotten, the fire becomes destructive. Attachment hardens. Craving multiplies. Duality spreads. But the Guru insists that the Creator has staged this entire play with one fire. The same energy that binds us can also awaken us. This is why the Shabad does not call us to escape the world. Instead, it invites us to discover the Divine within Maya itself.

And this insight finds a remarkable echo in a contemporary poem by Katie Farris, written centuries later but addressing the same burning world.


Why Write Love Poetry in a Burning World
 - Katie Farris

To train myself to find, in the midst of hell
what isn't hell.

The body, bald, cancerous, but still
beautiful enough to
imagine living the body
washing the body
replacing a loose front
porch step the body chewing
what it takes to keep a body
going—

This scene has a tune
a language I can read a door
I cannot close I stand
within its wedge
a shield.

Why write love poetry in a burning world?
To train myself, in the midst of a burning world
to offer poems of love to a burning world.

Farris's poem begins with a simple but difficult practice: to train myself to find, in the midst of hell, what isn't hell. She does not deny suffering. The body in her poem is bald from cancer. The world is burning. The pain is real. But even within that burning world she searches for what remains alive—small acts of care, attention, and tenderness. Washing a body. Replacing a porch step. Chewing food slowly enough to continue living. The poem suggests that love is not an escape from the burning world. Love is a discipline practiced inside it.

In that sense, Farris's poem is another way of standing inside the fire without forgetting what it is for. She is not looking for a way out. She is looking for what is still sacred within the flames. This is the same orientation the Guru points toward. The final lines of the Shabad reveal the transformation that makes joy possible: jinā liv lāgee tinee viche māyā pāyā. Those whose consciousness is absorbed in love find the Divine within Maya itself.

The fire does not disappear. The world continues with all its heat—its ambitions, fears, griefs, and desires. But something fundamental changes in the way we stand within it. The same flame that burns a house down can bake bread. The same Maya that traps the mind in craving becomes, when remembrance awakens, the place where the Divine is discovered.

This is why saints sing and poets write love poems even when the world burns. They are practicing remembrance. They are training themselves to notice what is still alive in the fire. Peace, then, is not a cool oasis somewhere outside the flames. It is a change of orientation within the heat of life. It is what happens when love learns how to stand inside the fire without being consumed by it. The world may burn. But the fire was never meant only to destroy. Sometimes it is there to bake the bread of joy.


In a world that often feels like it is burning—consumed by conflict, ambition, illness, and endless wanting—the search for peace can feel like a search for an exit. We imagine that somewhere there must be a cool, quiet place far away from the heat of life. Escape is not possible. And escape is not needed.  Joy comes from remembering what the fire is for. I have been thinking of this as I reflect on the following words from Guru Amardas (29th of 40 verses in his Verses of Joy).

This is why saints sing and poets write love poems even when the world burns. They are practicing remembrance. They are training themselves to notice what is still alive in the fire. Peace, then, is not a cool oasis somewhere outside the flames. It is a change of orientation within the heat of life. It is what happens when love learns how to stand inside the fire without being consumed by it. The world may burn. But the fire was never meant only to destroy. Sometimes it is there to bake the bread of joy.



The Story of the Wrong Petal

Once I played a wrong note
in Raag Ramkali—
the raag that sprouts 
love of wholeness.

One finger slipped,
a small rebellion on the string,
and I could hear sirens
of the raag-police.

Yet the note kept opening—
like a heart
breaking into bloom.

For a moment I wondered:
how could this be any different
from Anandkali—joy itself, sprouting?

Afterwards the tanpura
kept breathing
its ancient tale: yes.




Choosing Petals

The fire that burns us within
is not unlike what chars the world.
 - Guru Amardas

More dangerous than those
who believe God is seated
on some distant seventh sky,

and perhaps even more fickle
than those who think
He is sitting quietly beside us,

are those who decide 
the only place He sits
is on a mitochondrial throne 

within us. It begins 
with a small preference—
a petal over the flower,

a daisy over a wild spring,
a season over the one sun
that burns without choosing.

Maya, Holding Love’s Hand

This morning I considered your hand in mine
the way one considers weather—
a warmth arriving
that leaves with its pockets full of light.

My chai cooled while I thought about
the thousand songs of forever,
of two people holding on.

Then an ancient bard cleared his throat
from somewhere behind the Bhagavad Gita
hummed a single note:
love ends but never maya.

Outside, a couple passed, hand in hand,
while the wind turned one leaf into two.

Magic of Maya

Once I saw a magician 
stretch one red ribbon
and suddenly there are two.

Today I watched a baby lizard
slide out of its parent
in an Instagram video,

landing on a thin branch
as if the tree itself
had just invented it.

What could be 
more magical
than birth?

Especially one followed by no school, 
no rehearsal, just climbing 
already without eyes. 

The ancient bard claims
Maya makes two out of one.
And what about death?

Death, that lizard still clinging 
to the branch long after the tree
has turned back into earth.

Even more
magical
than birth.

The First Separation

The first thing that happens to us
is eviction.

Someone lifts us into the light,
cuts our cord to our origin,
and suddenly the world has edges—
your body here,
your mother — somewhere else
already being called someone other.
Eh Maya!

And from that moment on
everyone encourages the distance.

They give us mirrors,
names,
opinions about what belongs to us.

The world becomes a long lesson
in the word mine.

My shoes.
My thoughts.
My problems.
Maya! 

By the time we grow up
we are excellent at being separate—
little islands with excellent Wi-Fi.

The ancient bard once
appeared in the name 
of ever-serving and
sang the song of anand, 
the song of joy!

Right here,
inside this very body
made of dust and grocery lists
and the occasional headache,

there is a door
that does not lead outward.
Eh Maya!

It opens inward.

And when the throat loosens—
just a little—
a song slips through

and suddenly
the walls between things
forget their jobs.

The body remembers the ocean
it was briefly separated from,

and for a few minutes
while the note is traveling,

mother, child, world, breath—
everything
is singing the same line.
Eh Maya
I have come to see the phrase Ghar Ghar Baba—from the writings of Bhai Gurdas—as remarkably expansive. On the surface, it simply means “Baba in every house.” But both Ghar (house) and Baba open into far richer territory.

The word ghar has always carried a deeper resonance. A house is not just a structure; it is a dwelling, a chamber, a place where something lives. If we follow this idea inward, the human body itself becomes a city of houses—trillions of cells, each a small room pulsing with life. And here, modern science offers an astonishing insight: these cells remember. Here is the article I was reading today: https://www.popularmechanics.com/science/a70578341/memory-cells-consciousness/ - Your Cells Can ‘Remember’—Meaning Your Entire Body Could Be Conscious, Some Researchers Suggest,

Research now shows that memory is not confined to the brain. Throughout the body, cells store traces of past experiences through changes in gene activity—a phenomenon known as epigenetic memory. Immune cells, for instance, “remember” previous pathogens, enabling faster responses to future threats. Memory, it turns out, is not centralized. It is distributed. The body itself is a field of remembering.

Seen through this lens, Ghar Ghar Baba becomes more than a spiritual ideal—it becomes a biological truth. Wisdom is not seated only in the mind. It is woven into every living unit of the body. Each cell carries the story of what has come before: its lineage, its adaptations, its encounters with the world.

Bhai Nandlal captures this beautifully:

“Bas buzurgi hast andar yaad-e oo.”
Greatness lies in remembering.

But here, memory is more than recollection. It is continuity. A cell remembers how to remain a skin cell rather than becoming something else. A body remembers how to heal. A culture remembers how to sing. And the human spirit remembers the presence that the saints call Baba.

So Ghar Ghar Baba can be heard anew: in every house of the body, in every cell of life, there is a remembrance. Wisdom is memory awakened. And when memory deepens, identity clarifies. When identity clarifies, service becomes natural.

The ancient bards understood this intuitively, long before molecular biology began to explain it: greatness is not something we accumulate. It is something we remember. And remembrance is already alive—in every house of the body.
Ghar Ghar Baba — the album is out now. These five shabads are available on Spotify, YouTube, and Apple Music:
  • Tera Daasan Daasa
  • Eh Maaya
  • Ghar Ghar Baba
  • Mittar Pyare Nu (feat. Suhail Yusuf Khan)
  • Yaad-e-oo

The phrase Ghar Ghar Baba comes from Bhai Gurdas’s shabad in praise of Guru Nanak. Literally, it means “Baba in every home.” But ghar is not just a physical structure—it is a doorway to something deeper. A house can be a shelter, yes, but it can also be the ribcage that holds each breath, a memory passed down through generations, a fleeting moment, even a planet or a universe. In this way, every breath becomes a home, every heart a dwelling place, every cell a quiet chamber of presence. And Baba may be the Guru, Guru Nanak, wisdom itself, or simply—love.

This album is a humble attempt to listen for that presence—the quiet, abiding wisdom that moves through every doorway of life. If we listen closely, perhaps we begin to hear what the old singers were pointing toward: that the world itself is one vast home, and the song of the Guru is already echoing in every house.

Ghar Ghar Baba.

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I have been thinking of greatness these days and this morning I remembered a shlok by Guru Nanak which I used to often hear from my grandmother, and the more I have meditated upon it the more I have come to realize who it is a masterclass in spiritual poetry. It uses vivid natural imagery and incisive social observation to guide the seeker towards a fundamental truth. This particular composition, found on Ang 1412 of the Guru Granth Sahib, is not a single, linear argument but a diptych: two panels that, when viewed together, reveal a complete picture of spiritual integrity. The first panel uses the metaphor of the grand but useless silk-cotton tree to establish a principle of inner value. The second panel moves to the human realm, dissecting the nature of true humility versus its empty, performative shadow. Together, they form a powerful discourse on the essence of virtue, which the Guru identifies not in outward show, but in the sweet, lowly, and pure state of the heart. Here is the verse:

ਸਿੰਮਲ ਰੁਖੁ ਸਰਾਇਰਾ ਅਤਿ ਦੀਰਘ ਅਤਿ ਮੁਚੁ ॥
simmal rukh saraira at deeragh at much
The silk-cotton tree stands tall — very tall, very wide.

ਓਇ ਜਿ ਆਵਹਿ ਆਸ ਕਰਿ ਜਾਹਿ ਨਿਰਾਸੇ ਕਿਤੁ ॥
oi je aaveh aas kar jaye niraase kit
Those who come with hope leave disappointed.

ਫਲ ਫਿਕੇ ਫੁਲ ਬਕਬਕੇ ਕੰਮਿ ਨ ਆਵਹਿ ਪਤ ॥
fal fike ful bakabake kam na aaveh pat
Its fruit is tasteless, its flowers showy, its leaves of no use.

ਮਿਠਤੁ ਨੀਵੀ ਨਾਨਕਾ ਗੁਣ ਚੰਗਿਆਈਆ ਤਤੁ ॥
mithat neevi naanka gun changyaiyan tat
Sweetness and humility, Nanak — these are the essence of virtue.

ਸਭੁ ਕੋ ਨਿਵੈ ਆਪ ਕਉ ਪਰ ਕਉ ਨਿਵੈ ਨ ਕੋਇ ॥
sabh ko nivai aap kau par kau nivai na koye
Everyone bows for themselves. Few bow for another.

ਧਰਿ ਤਾਰਾਜੂ ਤੋਲੀਐ ਨਿਵੈ ਸੁ ਗਉਰਾ ਹੋਇ ॥
dhar taraajoo toliyai nivai su gauraa hoye
Place it on the scale — what lowers is weighty.

ਅਪਰਾਧੀ ਦੂਣਾ ਨਿਵੈ ਜੋ ਹੰਤਾ ਮਿਰਗਾਹਿ ॥
aparaadhee doonaa nivai jo ha(n)taa miragaeh
The guilty bow twice — like a hunter in the forest.

ਸੀਸਿ ਨਿਵਾਇਐ ਕਿਆ ਥੀਐ ਜਾ ਰਿਦੈ ਕੁਸੁਧੇ ਜਾਹਿ ॥੧॥
sees nivaiaai kiaa theeaai jaa ridhai kusudhe jaeh
What happens by lowering the head if the heart remains impure?


The opening image is striking and immediate: "The silk-cotton tree stands tall — very tall, very wide." The Guru paints a picture of immense physical grandeur. The simmal (silk-cotton tree) is a botanical marvel, towering over its surroundings, its thick trunk and sprawling branches promising shade and sustenance. It is, by all external measures, a success. Yet, this promise is a profound deception. Guru Nanak immediately subverts the image of majesty: "Those who come with hope / leave disappointed." The tree is a monument to futility. Its fruit is tasteless, offering no nourishment; its flowers are showy but lack fragrance or substance; its leaves are coarse and useless. Every part of this magnificent structure is, upon closer inspection, hollow. The tree is all form and no function, all appearance and no reality. It exists only for itself, taking up space and offering nothing of value to the world. This is a powerful allegory for a life lived solely on the surface—a life of status, wealth, and physical prowess that, devoid of inner goodness, ultimately leaves both the self and others unfulfilled.

From this negative example, the Guru distills a positive, counter-intuitive truth in the concluding couplet of the first panel: "Sweetness and humility, Nanak — / these are the essence of virtue." The word for sweetness, miṭhat, implies not just a pleasant taste but a gentle, amiable, and benevolent nature. Nīvī, or humility, is the quality of being low, both in stature and in ego. The contrast with the silk-cotton tree is absolute. The tree's virtue was in its appearance of height; true virtue lies in the "lowness" of humility. The tree's nature was bitter or useless; the virtuous nature is sweet. The Guru redefines the axis of value: spiritual weight is not measured by how high one stands, but by how deeply one can bow.

This redefinition sets the stage for the second panel, which plunges us into the complexities of human behavior. The Guru begins with a blunt observation of social reality: "Everyone bows for themselves. / Few bow for another." Here, "bowing" is a metaphor for service, deference, and sacrifice. Most human action, the Guru observes, is ultimately self-serving. Even acts of apparent kindness are often performed for personal gain, reputation, or a sense of self-satisfaction. This is the bow of the ego, a transaction where the "bow" is simply the price paid for a desired outcome.

Guru Nanak then introduces a profound paradox to redefine what true "weight" or worth is: "Place it on the scale — / what lowers is weighty." In the physical world, a heavier object makes the scale go down. In the spiritual realm, Guru Nanak reverses this law. The being who is genuinely humble, who "lowers" themselves in selfless service and submission to the Divine Will, is the one who is truly substantial, truly valuable. They have the "weight" of spiritual merit.

The Guru then provides two contrasting examples of "lowness" to clarify this paradox. The first is the hunter in the forest. To successfully hunt a deer, the hunter must crouch low, becoming small and inconspicuous. This bowing is born of aparādh, or guilt—the intention to do harm. It is a strategic lowering of the self for a selfish and violent purpose. This bow is heavy with sin, not virtue. The second example is implied in the rhetorical question that ends the salok: "What happens by lowering the head / if the heart remains impure?" This points to the ritualistic bow, the empty gesture of piety performed in temples or before holy men, while the heart remains filled with ego, greed, and malice. This bow is like the silk-cotton tree—impressive in its outward form but utterly hollow at its core. It carries no weight on the spiritual scale.

The hunter and the hypocrite perform the same physical act as the truly humble person—they lower themselves. But their inner state, their intention, is diametrically opposed. The true humility the Guru advocates is not a posture but a condition of the heart. It is a sweetness of being that arises from the eradication of ego, a natural lowness that seeks nothing for itself. It is the essence (tat) of virtue, the reality behind the form.

In this salok, Guru Nanak guides the seeker from a deceptive exterior to a truthful interior. He dismantles our attachment to the grand and the showy, using the silk-cotton tree as a warning against a life of hollow appearance. He then challenges our understanding of human action, forcing us to look beyond the gesture to the intention. The true measure of a person, the Guru declares, is not their height, their show, or even their bowed head, but the purity of their heart. To be truly "weighty," one must be inwardly sweet and genuinely low—a state of being that requires no performance, for it is the very essence of the soul in harmony with the Divine.

And the epitome of harmony with the Divine: considering everything that is happening as sweet. A matra to live by: Meetha Meetha!






Guru Gobind Singh's powerful mantra - 

Chattr chakr vartee, Chattr chakr bhugato
Suyambhav Subham Sarabadaa Sarab Jugate
Dukaalam Pranasi, Dayalam Saroope
Sadaa Ang Sange, Abhangang Bibhoote

Pervader of All Directions, Experiencing All That is
Self-arising, Self-luminous, Ever-present, Every Way
Destroyer of Darkness, Compassionate in Form
Forever Within, Indivisible Residual Presence

Chattr Chakr Varti – Reflection (Shivpreet Singh)

You pervade every direction, every circle of existence,
and You are the one who holds it, inhabits it, governs it—
not distant from creation, but fully present within it.

You are self-existent, self-arising, radiant in Your own being,
beautiful and auspicious by nature.
You are present in all, joined to all—
the hidden method, the inner intelligence by which everything coheres.

You are the destroyer of dukaal:
hard time, inner famine, fear, the collapse of meaning.
And You are dayaal—compassion itself,
mercy not abstract, but taking form.

You are always with us—limb with limb, breath with breath.
And yet You are abhang: unbreakable, indivisible, beyond decay.
Your power, bibhuti, remains even as ash—
not an ending, but the residue of truth.

This passage reads less like a checklist of divine qualities and more like a shift in how we’re meant to see. Guru Gobind Singh begins by loosening the familiar idea that God sits somewhere “over there,” a fixed point or a remote authority. Chattr chakr vartee points to a presence moving through every direction and every circle of existence—political, cosmic, psychological. And chattr chakr bhugatai takes it further: the One doesn’t just rule the circles of life from above; the One lives inside them, holds them, even “tastes” them. In this vision, power shows up as closeness.

The next lines widen that closeness into something almost metaphysical. Suyambhav names a reality that arises from itself—self-existent, self-illumined. Yet that kind of sovereignty doesn’t create distance. Sarabadaa sarab jugatai says this same self-existent One is present in all and threaded through all, the inner way things connect. God becomes the unseen coherence of life, the quiet intelligence that makes relationship possible.

Then the poem turns toward lived experience, especially the hard seasons. Dukaalam pranaasee isn’t only about famine or historical crisis. It also names the inner drought: fear, despair, the time when the mind collapses and meaning dries up. The line praises the One as the end of that season, the breaker of the spell. Immediately after, dayaalam saroopai brings tenderness into focus. Compassion isn’t an afterthought here. Mercy has presence. It takes shape. It enters the world in a recognizable form.

The final pair of lines lands the poem’s central tension in a way that feels deeply human. Sadaa ang sangai says the Divine stays close—limb with limb, breath with breath. That intimacy could sound fragile, as if closeness depends on conditions. Abhangang bibhute corrects that. This presence doesn’t crack under pressure. Even when everything burns down to ash, something remains—bibhuti, sacred residue, power that survives change.

Taken together, the passage offers a theology that refuses easy categories. God fills the world without getting diluted by it. God stays close without becoming breakable. God ends the drought and also arrives as compassion you can feel. Guru Gobind Singh gives us a vision where closeness carries authority, relationship carries eternity, and even ash holds a faint, stubborn light.

Recording this shabad and teaching this shabad for the kids for the upcoming Basant.

Meditating Upon Mauli Dharti  

Bhagat Kabir's Mauli Dharti is about the blossoming of the spiritual seeker.  Bhagat Kabir emphasizes the importance of spiritual growth and the pursuit of enlightenment. In Mauli Dharti, one of his poems, he uses the metaphor of a flower to illustrate his point about the potential for recognizing presence, enabling growth and encouraging transformation in all aspects of human life. This poem of the spring time encourages us to be like a flower, blossoming and growing in all our actions, whether we are creating, sustaining, or culminating something.

Refrain: Blossoming of the Inner Soul

Mauli Dharti Mauleya Akaas
Ghat Ghat Mauleya Aatam Pragaas
The earth blossoms, the sky blossoms
Every heart blossoms, when the soul blossoms

When the spiritual seeker is blossoming from within (aatam pragaas), which Guru Nanak calls "the light of the flower" (phoolant jyoti) in his aarti, it’s seems like everything around is blossoming. The earth is blossoming (mauli dharti), the sky is also blossoming (mauleya akaas) and every heart is blossoming (ghat ghat mauleya). 

Verses: Blossoming in Every Action

To me, the three verses of the poem correspond to the three potential actions we might be engaged in: creation, sustaining, or culmination, and the three divisions of self: mind, body and soul. 

1. Sustainer - Vishnu - Body

Raaja Raam Mauleo Anant Bhaye
Jeh Dekhon Teh Reheya Samaaye
King Raam blossoms many ways
Wherever I see he permeates

The soul like Raaja Raam, is present in all the forms that we are existing in the universe. All its forms that are existing are blossoming:

2. Creator - Brahma - Mind

Dvitiya Moule Chaare Bed
Simriti Mouli Syon Kateb
Second blossom the four vedas 
Simrities blossom along with Quran and Bible

3. Transformer - Mahesh - Soul

Shankar Mauleyo Jog Dhyaan
Kabir Ko Swami Sab Samaan
Shankar blossoms through meditation
My master, all the same

Meditating upon the poem invokes the creation, sustaining, and culmination agents within us: our body, mind, and soul. By aligning these aspects of ourselves with the natural growth and transformation that is inherent in the universe, we can become more fully realized and fulfilled human beings. The more we meditate on this poem, the more we realize our true essence, we realize our presence in every entity around us, we find spiritual growth in every scripture that we turn to, and we are eventually transformed to be a flower that does not have an ego and flowers on seeing others flowers blossom. We bloom in every aspect of our lives and can tap into the innate potential for growth and transformation that exists within us, and ultimately reach a state of greater awareness and enlightenment.

The Music and Artwork


I have been meditating on this Bhagat Kabir shabad since November. My daughter Geet learned this shabad from Bhai Tajvinder Singh ji and this composition is derived from that traditional composition.  You can find this recording on iTunes, spotify and YouTube music and several other places - just look for “Mauli Dharti.” 

Mauli Dharti: Artwork


Thanks to Snizhana Kozakevich (@snizhokartist) for her beautiful art inspired by Bhagat Kabir’s poetry - please support Ukrainian artists if you can. You can ask her for prints and this artwork.  You can also contribute to artists like Snizhana who are helping make this a better planet by donating to Dhunanand Foundation to which I donate all proceeds of my music. 


What do Flowers Teach Us


Flowers can teach us about oneness through their symbolism of unity, diversity, and interconnectedness. Flowers, despite their differences in color, shape, and fragrance, are all connected in the same ecosystem, relying on pollination and symbiotic relationships with other living beings for their survival. This reflects the idea of oneness in nature, where everything is connected and interdependent. Additionally, the beauty and harmonious arrangement of different flowers in a garden can symbolize the beauty and unity that can be achieved through diversity.


Mauli Dharti: Gurmukhi Lyrics

ਕਬੀਰ ਜੀ ਘਰੁ ੧

ੴ ਸਤਿਗੁਰ ਪ੍ਰਸਾਦਿ ॥

ਮਉਲੀ ਧਰਤੀ ਮਉਲਿਆ ਅਕਾਸੁ ॥
ਘਟਿ ਘਟਿ ਮਉਲਿਆ ਆਤਮ ਪ੍ਰਗਾਸੁ ॥੧॥

ਰਾਜਾ ਰਾਮੁ ਮਉਲਿਆ ਅਨਤ ਭਾਇ ॥
ਜਹ ਦੇਖਉ ਤਹ ਰਹਿਆ ਸਮਾਇ ॥੧॥ ਰਹਾਉ ॥

ਦੁਤੀਆ ਮਉਲੇ ਚਾਰਿ ਬੇਦ ॥
ਸਿੰਮ੍ਰਿਤਿ ਮਉਲੀ ਸਿਉ ਕਤੇਬ ॥੨॥

ਸੰਕਰੁ ਮਉਲਿਓ ਜੋਗ ਧਿਆਨ ॥
ਕਬੀਰ ਕੋ ਸੁਆਮੀ ਸਭ ਸਮਾਨ ॥੩॥੧॥

There are some voices that do not fade with time. They change color. Aalam-e-Raushan is a new album of five shabads that listens for those colors. Here is where you can stream the album: https://distrokid.com/hyperfollow/shivpreetsingh/aalam-e-raushan

The album celebrates the voice of Guru Gobind Singh's voice through his and Bhai Nandlal's words. Two of the compositions are brand new, and three are expansions or completely new versions of my older compositions. The album converses in the languages of the 10th guru: braj bhasha, punjabi, and farsi. 



Rather than treating Guru Gobind Singh as a distant historical figure, this album approaches him as living radiance: a light that instructs, unsettles, consoles, and awakens. In his own words - Sada Ang Sange Abhangam Bibhoote - you are always with me, indivisible from the the ash which comes from your holy fire. 

Each shabad in this collection reveals a different shade of Guru Gobind Singh's light—meditative stillness, ecstatic love, poetic praise, musical wonder, and practical wisdom for living fully awake in the world.

The Shabads & Their Light

1. Raagan Painda — The Path of Raag
2. Jin Prem Kiyo — Love beyond surfaces
3. Aalam-e-Raushan — The World Made Bright 
4. Puran Jot Jagai — Lighting the Inner Lamp
5. Chattr Chakra Varti — A Chant for All Directions


Shabads

Shabad 1 — ਆਲਮੇ ਰੌਸ਼ਨ (Full Shabad by Bhai Nandlal)

Gurmukhi

ਆਲਮੇ ਰੌਸ਼ਨ ਜ਼ਿ ਗੁਰ ਗੋਬਿੰਦ ਸਿੰਘ
ਜਾਨੋ ਦਿਲ ਗੁਲਸ਼ਨ ਜ਼ਿ ਗੁਰ ਗੋਬਿੰਦ ਸਿੰਘ ॥੧੪੫॥

English Translation

Because of Guru Gobind Singh,
the world is illuminated.

Because of Guru Gobind Singh,
the heart becomes a garden.

 Full Shabad: 

Gurmukhi Transcription

ਆਲਮਿ ਰੌਸ਼ਨ ਜ਼ਿ ਗੁਰੁ ਗੋਬਿੰਦ ਸਿੰਘ
ਜਾਨੋ ਦਿਲ ਗੁਲਸ਼ਨ ਜ਼ਿ ਗੁਰੁ ਗੋਬਿੰਦ ਸਿੰਘ

ਨਾਸਰੋ ਮੰਸੂਰ ਗੁਰੁ ਗੋਬਿੰਦ ਸਿੰਘ
ਈਜ਼ਦਿ ਮਨਜ਼ੂਰ ਗੁਰੁ ਗੋਬਿੰਦ ਸਿੰਘ

ਹੱਕ ਰਾ ਗੰਜੂਰ ਗੁਰੁ ਗੋਬਿੰਦ ਸਿੰਘ
ਜੁਮਲਾ ਫੈਜ਼ੋ ਨੂਰ ਗੁਰੁ ਗੋਬਿੰਦ ਸਿੰਘ

ਰੂਹ ਦਰ ਹਰ ਜਿਸਮ ਗੁਰੁ ਗੋਬਿੰਦ ਸਿੰਘ
ਨੂਰ ਦਰ ਹਰ ਚਸ਼ਮ ਗੁਰੁ ਗੋਬਿੰਦ ਸਿੰਘ

ਆਲਮਿ ਰੌਸ਼ਨ ਜ਼ਿ ਗੁਰੁ ਗੋਬਿੰਦ ਸਿੰਘ
ਜਾਨੋ ਦਿਲ ਗੁਲਸ਼ਨ ਜ਼ਿ ਗੁਰੁ ਗੋਬਿੰਦ ਸਿੰਘ

ਹੱਕ ਹੱਕ ਆਗਾਹ ਗੁਰੁ ਗੋਬਿੰਦ ਸਿੰਘ
ਸ਼ਾਹਿ ਸ਼ਾਹੰਸ਼ਾਹ ਗੁਰੁ ਗੋਬਿੰਦ ਸਿੰਘ

ਬਰ ਦੋ ਆਲਮ ਸ਼ਾਹ ਗੁਰੁ ਗੋਬਿੰਦ ਸਿੰਘ
ਖਸਮ ਰਾ ਜਾ ਕਾਹ ਗੁਰੁ ਗੋਬਿੰਦ ਸਿੰਘ

ਆਲਮਿ ਰੌਸ਼ਨ ਜ਼ਿ ਗੁਰੁ ਗੋਬਿੰਦ ਸਿੰਘ
ਜਾਨੋ ਦਿਲ ਗੁਲਸ਼ਨ ਜ਼ਿ ਗੁਰੁ ਗੋਬਿੰਦ ਸਿੰਘ

Translation

The world is radiant
because of Guru Gobind Singh.
The soul and the heart are in bloom
because of Guru Gobind Singh.

Helper and victorious guide,
chosen by the Divine—
Guru Gobind Singh.

Bearer of truth’s treasury,
the gathering of all grace and light—
Guru Gobind Singh.

Soul within every body,
light within every eye—
Guru Gobind Singh.

The world is radiant
because of Guru Gobind Singh.
The soul and the heart are in bloom
because of Guru Gobind Singh.

Awake to truth upon truth,
king beyond all kings—
Guru Gobind Singh.

Sovereign of both worlds,
the breaking of hostile force—
Guru Gobind Singh.

The world is radiant
because of Guru Gobind Singh.
The soul and the heart are in bloom
because of Guru Gobind Singh.


Shabad 2 — ਰਾਗਨ ਪੈਡਾ (Raagan Painda)

Gurmukhi

ਕਾਨ੍ਹ੍ਹ ਤਰੈ ਤਰੁ ਕੇ ਮੁਰਲੀ ਸੁ ਬਜਾਇ ਉਠਿਯੋ
ਤਨ ਕੋ ਕਰਿ ਐਡਾ ॥

ਮੋਹ ਰਹੀ ਜਮੁਨਾ ਖਗ ਅਉ ਹਰਿ ਜਛ
ਸਭੈ ਅਰਨਾ ਅਰੁ ਗੈਡਾ ॥

ਪੰਡਿਤ ਮੋਹਿ ਰਹੇ ਸੁਨ ਕੈ
ਅਰੁ ਮੋਹਿ ਗਏ ਸੁਨ ਕੈ ਜਨ ਜੈਡਾ ॥

ਬਾਤ ਕਹੀ ਕਬਿ ਨੈ ਮੁਖ ਤੇ
ਮੁਰਲੀ ਇਹ ਨਾਹਿਨ ਰਾਗਨ ਪੈਡਾ ॥੧੯੫॥

English Translation

Standing beneath a tree,
Krishna lifts the flute to his lips.

The river forgets herself.
Birds, spirits, serpents,
beasts of forest and field—
all are drawn in.

Scholars pause mid-thought.
So do the ordinary and unnamed.

The poet says:
this is not a flute.

This is the long road of raag itself—
where sound becomes a path
and the listener begins to walk.

Shabad 3 — ਜਿਨ ਪ੍ਰੇਮ ਕੀਓ

Gurmukhi

ਕਹਾ ਭਯੋ ਜੋ ਦੋਊ ਲੋਚਨ
ਮੂੰਦ ਕੈ ਬੈਠਿ ਰਹਿਓ ਬਕ ਧਿਆਨ ਲਗਾਇਓ ॥

ਨ੍ਹਾਤ ਫਿਰਿਓ ਲੀਏ ਸਾਤ ਸਮੁਦ੍ਰਨਿ
ਲੋਕ ਗਯੋ ਪਰਲੋਕ ਗਵਾਇਓ ॥

ਬਾਸ ਕੀਓ ਬਿਖਿਆਨ ਸੋਂ ਬੈਠ
ਕੈ ਐਸੇ ਹੀ ਐਸੇ ਸੁ ਬੈਸ ਬਿਤਾਇਓ ॥

ਸਾਚੁ ਕਹੋਂ ਸੁਨ ਲੇਹੁ ਸਭੈ
ਜਿਨ ਪ੍ਰੇਮ ਕੀਓ ਤਿਨ ਹੀ ਪ੍ਰਭੁ ਪਾਇਓ ॥੯॥੨੯॥

ਕਾਹੂ ਲੈ ਪਾਹਨ ਪੂਜ ਧਰਯੋ ਸਿਰ
ਕਾਹੂ ਲੈ ਲਿੰਗੁ ਗਰੇ ਲਟਕਾਇਓ ॥

ਕਾਹੂ ਲਖਿਓ ਹਰਿ ਅਵਾਚੀ ਦਿਸਾ ਮਹਿ
ਕਾਹੂ ਪਛਾਹ ਕੋ ਸੀਸੁ ਨਿਵਾਇਓ ॥

ਕੋਊ ਬੁਤਾਨ ਕੋ ਪੂਜਤ ਹੈ ਪਸੁ
ਕੋਊ ਮ੍ਰਿਤਾਨ ਕੋ ਪੂਜਨ ਧਾਇਓ ॥

ਕੂਰ ਕ੍ਰਿਆ ਉਰਝਿਓ ਸਭ ਹੀ ਜਗ
ਸ੍ਰੀ ਭਗਵਾਨ ਕੋ ਭੇਦੁ ਨ ਪਾਇਓ ॥੧੦॥੩੦॥

English Translation

What is gained
by closing the eyes
and sitting still like a crane,
pretending to be absorbed?

What is gained
by bathing in every ocean,
if this life slips away
and the next is lost too?

Some retreat to forests,
some cling to techniques,
spending years
busy with gestures.

Listen—this is the truth:
only those who loved
found the Divine.

Some lift stones onto their heads,
some hang symbols from their necks.

Some look for God in one direction,
some bow toward another.

Some worship idols,
some revere animals,
some chase the memory of the dead.

The whole world is tangled
in borrowed rituals,
and the mystery of the One
remains unseen.

Shabad 4 — ਪੂਰਨ ਜੋਤਿ ਜਗੈ

Gurmukhi

ਜਾਗਤ ਜੋਤਿ ਜਪੈ ਨਿਸ ਬਾਸੁਰ
ਏਕੁ ਬਿਨਾ ਮਨਿ ਨੈਕ ਨ ਆਨੈ ॥

ਪੂਰਨ ਪ੍ਰੇਮ ਪ੍ਰਤੀਤ ਸਜੈ
ਬ੍ਰਤ ਗੋਰ ਮੜ੍ਹ੍ਹੀ ਮਠ ਭੂਲ ਨ ਮਾਨੈ ॥

ਤੀਰਥ ਦਾਨ ਦਇਆ ਤਪ ਸੰਜਮ
ਏਕੁ ਬਿਨਾ ਨਹਿ ਏਕ ਪਛਾਨੈ ॥

ਪੂਰਨ ਜੋਤਿ ਜਗੈ ਘਟ ਮੈ
ਤਬ ਖਾਲਸ ਤਾਹਿ ਨ ਖਾਲਸ ਜਾਨੈ ॥੧॥

English Translation

One who keeps company
with the wakeful Light,
night and day,
letting nothing else
take residence in the mind.

One who is clothed
in complete love and trust,
no longer distracted
by shrines, tombs, or sanctuaries.

Baths, offerings, kindness, restraint—
without the One,
none of them know what they are doing.

When the full light
ignites within the heart,
then purity is no longer claimed—
it is simply recognized.

Shabad 5 — ਚੱਤ੍ਰ ਚੱਕ੍ਰ ਵਰਤੀ

Gurmukhi

ਚੱਤ੍ਰ ਚੱਕ੍ਰ ਵਰਤੀ ਚੱਤ੍ਰ ਚੱਕ੍ਰ ਭੁਗਤੇ ॥
ਸੁਯੰਭਵ ਸੁਭੰ ਸਰਬਦਾ ਸਰਬ ਜੁਗਤੇ ॥
ਦੁਕਾਲੰ ਪ੍ਰਣਾਸੀ ਦਿਆਲੰ ਸਰੂਪੇ ॥
ਸਦਾ ਅੰਗ ਸੰਗੇ ਅਭੰਗੰ ਬਿਭੂਤੇ ॥੧੯੯॥

Chattr Chakr Vartee Chattr Chakr Bhugatay
Suyambhav Subham Sarabadaa Sarab Jugatay
Dukaalam Praṇasee Diaalam Saroopay
Sadaa Ang Sangay Abhangam Bibhootay

Pervading every direction,
delighting in all that is.

Self-arising, radiant,
woven into everything.

The end of hard seasons,
mercy given form.

Always by my side—
unbroken, ash-pure.
I am writing a longish poem on beards and bearded bards and I came across a beautiful poem by Wallace Stevens—“Tea at the Palaz of Hoon.” This is one of his earlier poems from his first book Harmonium. According to Paul Mariani (whose The Whole Harmonium I cherish), this is a poem that foretells the "radiant sun god Ra" that Wallace's poems would shine later. 

Tea at the Palaz of Hoon
- Wallace Stevens

Not less because in purple I descended
The western day through what you called
The loneliest air, not less was I myself.

What was the ointment sprinkled on my beard?
What were the hymns that buzzed beside my ears?
What was the sea whose tide swept through me there?

Out of my mind the golden ointment rained,
And my ears made the blowing hymns they heard.
I was myself the compass of that sea:

I was the world in which I walked, and what I saw
Or heard or felt came not but from myself;
And there I found myself more truly and more strange.

It’s only three tercets, but it opens like a window at dusk. The speaker descends “the western day”—already an autumnal, sunset direction—and asks what anointed him, what sang to him, and what sea moved through him. Then he answers: the “golden ointment” rained from his own mind, his ears made the hymns they heard, and he himself was the compass of that sea. The poem closes with a line I have seen before, not knowing where it was from: “I was the world in which I walked… / And there I found myself more truly and more strange.”

I think the speaker can be the sun or sunset: “descended / the western day” suggests sundown; “golden ointment” is the evening light poured over the world; “hymns” are twilight’s insect choir; the “sea” is both literal ocean and the tide of failing light. If the sun speaks, it anoints its own “beard” (the glowing fringe of clouds, or—closer to home—my own beard catching the last light). But Wallace immediately turns that outer spectacle inside: “Out of my mind the golden ointment rained.” The poem wants us to notice how perception co-creates the scene. So the richest reading is both: sunset as the world’s ceremony and the perceiving mind as its inner priest. This is interesting, because it is fall here in San Ramon, and sun is going down as I type this out. 

Anyhow, this matters for the “bearded bard” I’m chasing. A beard can be a badge of ego, but Wallace oils it with humility. The anointing doesn’t descend from an external authority; it arrives as an inner climate at evening. Autumn works this way: the showy green of noon recedes and hidden colors step forward. Likewise, the poem stages the sunset of the poet’s ego: not self-erasure, but a loosening that lets the world and the walker coincide. “I was the world in which I walked” isn’t grandiosity; it’s non-duality in plain clothes. Reality happens where attention happens. When attention is generous, the boundary between singer and song softens; the ears “make” hymns by honest hearing; the sea’s pull is answered by an inner compass—attunement, not control.

That’s why the last line volunteers its paradox: in letting go, the self becomes “more truly and more strange.” Truth arrives as wonder, not as a fixed mask. And sunset is the right emblem: the light steps down, edges blur, and yet everything glows more intimately. For my own poem, this is the invitation: let the beard be less a credential and more a wick; let the evening oil it; let listening be the ceremony; and walk as the world, not apart from it. 

Now I've forgotten what I was writing about. Thanks Wallace. Maybe I should stick to reading short poems instead of writing long ones. 


My other favorite poem of Wallace Stevens: The Emperor of Ice Cream

Happy Diwali, folks! I’m thrilled to share that my poem “Moondrunk on Diwali” is up at Rattle today—my first published poem.

Huge thanks to Tim Green, Rattle’s editor, for the care he brings to the magazine and the countless hours he gives to poetry. Editing is tough, generous work—making space for others to shine—and from everything I’ve seen these past months, Tim does it in service of poetry.

If you’re new to Rattle: it’s a reader-friendly poetry journal with a subscription base of around 12,000, they read 250,000 poems and publish 300 every year, and their mission is—to promote the practice of poetry. Learn more about Rattle and while you’re visiting, here are three recent poems I loved:

  • "Weathering the Storm" - Colleen Farrelly — a science poem, that becomes personal.

  • “Vacating” by Michael Brosnan — a thoughtful inventory of work, art, and what we keep.

  • “Empathy” by Chelsea McClellan — a devastating and moving poem about pain.

I’ve been learning my way through contemporary poetry for about a decade, but only started submitting to journals last month (mid-September). Four more poems are slated to appear in other magazines soon (The Woolf, Santa Clara Review, UNHOUSED anthology by Prolific Press, Neon & Smoke) —more on that when they land. 

I guess am having some beginner's luck. But its not all luck.  I wanted to thank to a few friends & contemporary poetry teachers who shaped my work: Robert Hass (initial direction in 2008), the late Tony Hoagland (encouragement and generosity to use his poems on my blog), Billy Collins (his poems, his masterclass, his advice on flow, titles, and wonder), Kristen Mears (for editing some of my poetry over the past 2 years), Jane Hirshfield (for her essays, poetry readings and receptivity), Hannah Yerrington (to firm my believe in the poetry of joy/praise), Tess Taylor (for her poetry submissions class), Maggie Queeney (for her form/repetition classes at the Poetry Foundation -- this poem came from an assignment in her class), Maya Popa (for her class on how to review poems).  Also to the Seekers and Seers group who get to bear some of the raw poems I am writing, and still encourage me. 








It was Wallace Stevens’s birthday, so I let myself wander back through the poems of his that have been living, quietly, in my pockets. I’ve written about a handful on my site over the years—how the worldly and the otherworldly pour through him like light through colored glass. 

There’s the wry funeral hymn of “The Emperor of Ice-Cream”, where pleasure and mortality sit across the same kitchen table; the little fable I once called “proof that life continues after death”, which is really about how imagination won’t stop working even when the world says stop; the bright elegy “Mozart, 1935”, where music keeps the window open; a few philosophical miniatures that felt like stones in the pocket; and the mountain that got traded out for a poem, “The Poem That Took the Place of a Mountain.” 

There are three additional ones that I like but I haven't posted yet: Sunday Morning, Anecdote of the Jar, Thirteen Ways of Looking at a Blackbird. I have posted those below, 

Every birthday is an excuse to reread, but this time two small tributes found me—poems written for him, or to him, or in his neighborhood. Reading them was like bumping into a friend of a friend who not only remembers your favorite stories but tells them in a new key.

Here’s the first, by David Ignatow:

In Memoriam, 1879–1979
On an Ordinary Evening

by David Ignatow

I am back to walking alone
through silent streets lit by colorful windows
of the homes of responsible men and women,
and I refuse responsibility.
I am weeping without tears,
with hands jammed into pockets
under trees smelling of leaves
and grass of the gardens—
smelling the silence of stolidity
and peace and wanting no peace
until it is written in my poems.

And here’s the second, printed in Mānoa:

Wallace Stevens Walks by the Sea

And now it is that it rises.
Beyond what we can hear,
the whole ocean as a hand
across a mouth. I walk
and it is only this thought.
And it is only this darkness that
lies on the eyes like two coins.
Everything beautiful is also in motion,
isn’t that a curious thing.
If you look closely enough
you fall down a flight of stairs,
the constellations on their little wheels,
the ocean everywhere.

Why do these feel so Stevensy without ever dressing up in his vocabulary? Maybe because they step onto his stage—the everyday world—and speak his verb: to make. Stevens kept reminding us (with the gentle stubbornness of someone who knew both premiums and poems) that art is not something pinned under glass; it’s a present-tense action. In “Of Modern Poetry” he names it plain: “the poem of the mind in the act of finding / what will suffice.” Ignatow’s ending—“wanting no peace / until it is written in my poems”—is that same ethic in work boots. No peace until the making happens.

Ignatow also borrows Stevens’s sidewalk: the city block, “silent streets,” windows lit up with the lives of “responsible men and women.” It’s hard not to hear the long, lucid walk of An Ordinary Evening in New Haven pacing under his lines—the way Stevens tests thought against stoops and hedges, how the metaphysical keeps glancing off a literal windowpane. (If you want just one page to keep by your tea, the Poetry Foundation bio and the lovely Stevens 101 sketch this late style well.)

The sea-walk poem turns the compass the other way—back to water, the great theater of “The Idea of Order at Key West.” In Key West, the ocean makes “the constant cry,” and a human voice arranges that noise into something like song; here, the ocean becomes “a hand / across a mouth.” It’s a gorgeous reversal: the inhuman doesn’t shout; it hushes. When the sea covers the mouth, thinking has to sing. That’s Stevens all over—the pressure on the imagination to answer the world, not by escaping it but by answering it in kind.

Then there’s that line, “Everything beautiful is also in motion,” which, if you’ve read Notes Toward a Supreme Fiction, feels like a friendly paraphrase of the rule that beauty (and truth) must change. Stevens writes somewhere that reality is the activity of the mind among its images; the tribute poem gives us the mind’s balance problem: look closely enough and “you fall down a flight of stairs,” past the bannister of the visible into “constellations on their little wheels.” That drop—from close domestic detail into starry scale—is a trick Stevens loved, whether in “The Auroras of Autumn” or the sea-mirroring stanzas of “Sea Surface Full of Clouds.” The last line here—“the ocean everywhere”—reads like a one-line biography of his imagination.

I keep circling back to the mood both tributes share: a kind of lucid sorrow. Ignatow calls it “weeping without tears,” and in Stevens’s own late work the weather is similar—“The Plain Sense of Things” has “this blank cold, this sadness without cause.” But notice what both tributes inherit besides the weather: the remedy. Not denial, not grand consolation—just the honest labor of making. Walk. Look. Think. Make. If there’s peace, it only arrives after the poem, not before.

So on his birthday I end up where I usually end up with Stevens: grateful for the way he lets the ordinary keep its ordinariness while asking it very large questions. Grateful for the brisk hand he lends to newer poets who want to think in the open air. And grateful for how his poems, even when they face the cold, keep a stove going. If the mountain can be replaced by a poem, as he once wrote, maybe a little of the sea and the street can be, too—not to erase them, but to meet them with a music we ourselves make.

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A documentary on Wallace Stevens:


A good lecture on Wallace Stevens: 


Lovely picks. Here are concise notes plus full texts (all public-domain) for each.

Anecdote of the Jar 

A tiny parable about art’s power to impose order: a plain jar “takes dominion” over a “slovenly wilderness,” raising questions about whether culture clarifies or colonizes nature. Stevens keeps the diction bare—“gray and bare”—so the form enacts the idea. Many readers hear echoes of modernism’s cool confidence (and its limits): once the jar arrives, everything rearranges itself around it, yet the jar “did not give of bird or bush.” Control isn’t the same as life.

I placed a jar in Tennessee,
And round it was, upon a hill.
It made the slovenly wilderness
Surround that hill.

The wilderness rose up to it,
And sprawled around, no longer wild.
The jar was round upon the ground
And tall and of a port in air.

It took dominion everywhere.
The jar was gray and bare.
It did not give of bird or bush,
Like nothing else in Tennessee.


Sunday Morning 

A meditation that begins with “coffee and oranges” and opens into the big argument of Harmonium: can earthly beauty and mortal joy suffice without Christian transcendence? Across eight cantos, Stevens contrasts churchly “ancient sacrifice” with a pagan fidelity to the here-and-now—“Death is the mother of beauty.” The poem’s music moves from lush description to metaphysical clarity, ending not in despair but in a luminous acceptance of a world “Unsponsored, free, / Of that wide water, inescapable.”


I
Complacencies of the peignoir, and late
Coffee and oranges in a sunny chair,
And the green freedom of a cockatoo
Upon a rug mingle to dissipate
The holy hush of ancient sacrifice.
She dreams a little, and she feels the dark
Encroachment of that old catastrophe,
As a calm darkens among water-lights.
The pungent oranges and bright, green wings
Seem things in some procession of the dead,
Winding across wide water, without sound.
The day is like wide water, without sound,
Stilled for the passing of her dreaming feet
Over the seas, to silent Palestine,
Dominion of the blood and sepulchre.

II
Why should she give her bounty to the dead?
What is divinity if it can come
Only in silent shadows and in dreams?
Shall she not find in comforts of the sun,
In pungent fruit and bright, green wings, or else
In any balm or beauty of the earth,
Things to be cherished like the thought of heaven?
Divinity must live within herself:
Passions of rain, or moods in falling snow;
Grievings in loneliness, or unsubdued
Elations when the forest blooms; gusty
Emotions on wet roads on autumn nights;
All pleasures and all pains, remembering
The bough of summer and the winter branch.
These are the measures destined for her soul.

III
Jove in the clouds had his inhuman birth.
No mother suckled him, no sweet land gave
Large-mannered motions to his mythy mind.
He moved among us, as a muttering king,
Magnificent, would move among his hinds,
Until our blood, commingling, virginal,
With heaven, brought such requital to desire
The very hinds discerned it, in a star.
Shall our blood fail? Or shall it come to be
The blood of paradise? And shall the earth
Seem all of paradise that we shall know?
The sky will be much friendlier then than now,
A part of labor and a part of pain,
And next in glory to enduring love,
Not this dividing and indifferent blue.

IV
She says, “I am content when wakened birds,
Before they fly, test the reality
Of misty fields, by their sweet questionings;
But when the birds are gone, and their warm fields
Return no more, where, then, is paradise?”
There is not any haunt of prophecy,
Nor any old chimera of the grave,
Neither the golden underground, nor isle
Melodious, where spirits gat them home,
Nor visionary south, nor cloudy palm
Remote on heaven’s hill, that has endured
As April’s green endures; or will endure
Like her remembrance of awakened birds,
Or her desire for June and evening, tipped
By the consummation of the swallow’s wings.

V
She says, “But in contentment I still feel
The need of some imperishable bliss.”
Death is the mother of beauty; hence from her,
Alone, shall come fulfillment to our dreams
And our desires. Although she strews the leaves
Of sure obliteration on our paths—
The path sick sorrow took, the many paths
Where triumph rang its brassy phrase, or love
Whispered a little out of tenderness—
She makes the willows shiver in the sun
For maidens who were wont to sit and gaze
Upon the grass, relinquished to their feet.
She causes boys to pile new-plucked pears
On disregarded plate. The maidens taste
And stray impassioned in the littering leaves.

VI
Is there no change of death in paradise?
Does ripe fruit never fall? Or do the boughs
Hang always heavy in that perfect sky,
Unchanging, yet so like our perishing earth,
With rivers like our own that seek for seas
They never find, the same receding shores
That never touch with inarticulate pang?
Why set the pear upon those river-banks
Or spice the shores with odors of the plum?
Alas, that they should wear our colors there,
The silken weavings of our afternoons,
And pick the strings of our insipid lutes!
Death is the mother of beauty, mystical,
Within whose burning bosom we devise
Our earthly mothers waiting, sleeplessly.
Supple and turbulent, a ring of men
Shall chant in orgy on a summer morn
Their boisterous devotion to the sun,
Not as a god, but as a god might be,
Naked among them, like a savage source.

VII
Supple and turbulent, a ring of men
Shall chant in orgy on a summer morn.
Their boisterous devotion to the sun—
Not as a god, but as a god might be—
Naked among them, like a savage source.
Their chant shall be a chant of paradise,
Out of their blood, returning to the sky;
And in their chant shall enter, voice by voice,
The windy lake wherein their lord delights,
The trees, like serafin, and echoing hills,
That choir among themselves long afterward.
They shall know well the heavenly fellowship
Of men that perish and of summer morn.
And whence they came and whither they shall go
The dew upon their feet shall manifest.

VIII
She hears, upon that water without sound,
A voice that cries, “The tomb in Palestine
Is not the porch of spirits lingering.
It is the grave of Jesus, where he lay.”
We live in an old chaos of the sun,
Or old dependency of day and night,
Or island solitude, unsponsored, free,
Of that wide water, inescapable.
Deer walk upon our mountains, and the quail
Whistle about us their spontaneous cries;
Sweet berries ripen in the wilderness;
And, in the isolation of the sky,
At evening, casual flocks of pigeons make
Ambiguous undulations as they sink,
Downward to darkness, on extended wings.


Thirteen Ways of Looking at a Blackbird 

A prism of 13 tiny visions, each tilting the world a degree. The blackbird becomes a device for seeing how perception makes reality—sometimes comic (“O thin men of Haddam”), sometimes crystalline (“I was of three minds”). Its spare lines and musical pauses (that famous “or just after”) show Stevens testing how much meaning can live in minimal images. The result is both playful and philosophical: a manual for attention.

Text
I
Among twenty snowy mountains,
The only moving thing
Was the eye of the blackbird.

II
I was of three minds,
Like a tree
In which there are three blackbirds.

III
The blackbird whirled in the autumn winds.
It was a small part of the pantomime.

IV
A man and a woman
Are one.
A man and a woman and a blackbird
Are one.

V
I do not know which to prefer,
The beauty of inflections
Or the beauty of innuendoes,
The blackbird whistling
Or just after.

VI
Icicles filled the long window
With barbaric glass.
The shadow of the blackbird
Crossed it, to and fro.
The mood
Traced in the shadow
An indecipherable cause.

VII
O thin men of Haddam,
Why do you imagine golden birds?
Do you not see how the blackbird
Walks around the feet
Of the women about you?

VIII
I know noble accents
And lucid, inescapable rhythms;
But I know, too,
That the blackbird is involved
In what I know.

IX
When the blackbird flew out of sight,
It marked the edge
Of one of many circles.

X
At the sight of blackbirds
Flying in a green light,
Even the bawds of euphony
Would cry out sharply.

XI
He rode over Connecticut
In a glass coach.
Once, a fear pierced him,
In that he mistook
The shadow of his equipage
For blackbirds.

XII
The river is moving.
The blackbird must be flying.

XIII
It was evening all afternoon.
It was snowing
And it was going to snow.
The blackbird sat
In the cedar-limbs.

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